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"Haha, you did." I couldn't help but chuckle. It didn't look like much, but It was a huge step in the right direction.
Fantasy · Immortal_Simo
Not looked, had. Change that
As they continued on a 'leisurely' stroll they came upon a tent. It looked like a pure white and beige pastels. People were going in and out, like an ant hill. Mostly soldiers and maybe child soldiers. All with masks on.
Fantasy · Mood_Acle
fuh another typo
They walked on in silence, pass the guards of the pit. On the way, there were other pits like it surround by soldiers in the same attire. It was a harrowing experience ad the bright skies and foliage met the woeful mess of pits and fire.
Fantasy · Mood_Acle
I’m catching up innit
that ball hurt is serious mah brother
He was certain he had broken, a the very least, a few ribs. His bleeding had accelerated. His skin had been torn in multiple areas. His body was bruised essentially all over, even his balls hurt.
Action · Lord_Streak
I skipped cause, I don't want to read your first attempt ... or the others after it.
The Uchiha clan leader couldn't help but feel optimistic about the future.
Anime & Comics · MilexKor
I see ...hmm
In the end, I got an eggplant, an ear of corn, a few berries, and some potatoes. I picked them out and handed the farmer 3G for it all.
Fantasy · perilousindulgence
You know, I've never had an eggplant before.
In the end, I got an eggplant, an ear of corn, a few berries, and some potatoes. I picked them out and handed the farmer 3G for it all.
Fantasy · perilousindulgence
Reborn as dragon is novel that I recommend for people who like non-human characters with some what redeeming qualities. What I mean by that is that they don't become a murder hobo by the tenth chapter.[img=faceslap] *side eye* reborn as a monster trope but with the memories of a good human. Usually sometimes the authors force the narrative of not having a choice when in actuality they do. Aether has a choice. He chose good neutral. I like his character as well, he doesn't really know what he is even though he's been a dragon for a couple years. "He just like me furreal". He has a good sibling relationship, unlike myself and he understands the role he has been put into. Continuing with giving props to the author, I find his his fights enjoyable because well, there is not a system every fifteenth line talkin' about HP damage. [Recommend me some good novels please.] I find the pacing of the story to be moderately paced, but if your lookin for somethin slow look on RR, Ashes of Heaven, for all who know. The pace is not a problem, there are some little 'icks' I would say with the time skips but they are barely perceivable. Moving onto topics such as his character development, I would say that the mc, Aether, has not changed the game for the dragon gang but I would say that his adventures in PIYA after his escapade is good. Really good in my opinion I am sure others would not agree but that's them. So Aether has changed, there are some convenient placement on the pride instinct but overall I would say that he has changed to a personality of a true dragon, cringe not him, but cringe. He is graceful, prideful, wise, somewhat unhinged when it comes to cosmic mana and he isn't a sister-con thank God. He used to hesitate a lot but now he thinks on his feet really well. One character I don't know what your going for though is Ari, I guess I'll wait and see. _________________________ THE WORLD - Dio Really like the world, I like the idea that the magic that the humans do is hurting it rather than helping it, it's like a climate change thing. *Lol*. I'm liking the introduction of the new age so far, I wont say much but I believe that you will love it when ya read it. Thanks for the chapters so far man. Hats off to you.
Reborn as a DRAGON [STUB]
Fantasy · Immortal_Simo