Its just my own Opinion you can write your novel however you like
The writing format needs to be improved you can differentiate what is happening and who is talking by using a colon :, a Dash -, Parentheses (), Brackets [], Quotation Marks "", Single Quotation Mark '', and Ellipses ... I am going to give you an example on how i would rephrase your chapter The Beginning: "I am currently meeting a ROB who is explaining how I was accidently killed by his angel son." [I am sorry to tell you that you have passed away. The reason being is that one of my Angel sons had accidently caused you a heart attack that was meant for someone with the exact same name as you.] "Why am I so calm about finding out I am dead to a mistake" [I made it so you stay calm and that you wouldn't panic and freak out when I told you] "Will I be going to Heaven or Hell, or will I be reincarnating in the same world." [It is up to you to choose, but I do have another option for you. It's for you to Transmigrate to another world with some wishes.] "How many wishes will I be getting? [You will be granted 8 wishes] "Does choosing the world I want to be in and changing my appearance cost me a wish" [NO those will be added in as a Boon and does not take up any of your 8 wishes] "Ok so for the world I want to reincarnate into will be Teen Wolf with the appearance of 'Oreki Houtarou' but with a Swimmer body build." "Could you make it so that I am the same age as Scott and his pack" [Granted] For my wishes I want: -To be a Dragon with power over all Natural Elements -To have 4 forms 1.Human, 2.Partial Transformation 'Teen Wolf', 3.Hybrid Form, 4. Full Form -To have the Power of Runes From 'Shadowhunters' -To be Immortal (Lifespan) and being able to grant it to others -To have Deadpool's Regenerative ability and being able to pass it on to members of his pack -To have a Mate Bond with Lydia Martin where she is capable of seeing all of my forms in her Dreams -To be an only child to billionaire parents who decided to move to beacon hills once he turns 16 -To have clone of myself in the past and pass down the Runes to the Argent family but Kate and Gerard are unable to use the Runes. [Your wishes are granted but I will need to tweak them a bit] [For Immortality I will make it so that you can stop and regress others age if they give you consent, but they wont be immortal they will still have a long lifespan. As for Deadpool's Regenerative ability you will have the full ability but your pack members will only have a percentage of its full capabilities. ] [Your abilities will start off weak, and gradually become stronger as you train. You will be getting your abilities at 10 Yrs old but you wont be able to fully turn till you turn 15 yrs old] "Thank you for the opportunity to Transmigrate to another world" [Bye have fun and enjoy your new life]
Thx for the chapter
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I'm all in for Both
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You can use a different format for the wishes I just did it like that since it was simple and quick
reborn as a dragon in teen wolf
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