biggus

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biggus
biggus
3 years ago
Posted

It starts off all well intentioned and as quite a nice read but as you start to get past 150 chapters you start to realise that this story is being stretched hard, his second evolution is at level 20 around chapter 88 but the third evolution at level 40 doesnt happen until the very late 300s around 390ish for a novel claiming about evolving to the top its not doing a lot of and considering that the max level of the original game was like level 100 this story is probably going to be like 5000 chapters most of which will be boring filler with no purpose or repeated content to fill in word counts. i would be fine with such a stretch of time between evolutions if the story was nearing its end but considering his first 2 evolutions were in the first 90 odd chapters (at level 5 and 20) i would expect that the third evolution would happen about double that length in seeing as he has to get to level 40. but instead of around chapter 200 being his evolution its nearing 400 instead TL;DR this isnt an evolution novel, this is boring filler with money being the only reason for writing

biggus
biggus
3 years ago
Commented

Dont let any of them defeat you, or, dont let any one of them defeat you

biggus
biggus
3 years ago
Commented

Really shouldn’t have put the abortion statement in there OR you should have written in the same lines why she feels that way rather than “ABORTION BAD”, i know you gave a reason in the comments here but not everyone reads those, and thats a terrible way to justify her actions. terrible people and poor life circumstances aren’t synonymous Also, ever heard of adoption? might want to look into it.

biggus
biggus
3 years ago
Replied to ShallanDavar

Yeah your about right air and pure water are very bad thermal conductors. it means they dont keep heat well. so ironically enough the wind users should dominate over fire users if they can create a vacuum

If wind-elemental users have the power to create a vacuum, then the fire-elemental users have the power of thermal radiation which could bypass any medium such as air or liquid.

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

biggus
biggus
3 years ago
Commented

Gravity doesnt increase, it is a constant force.

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Eye System

Eye System

Fantasy · Adam_A

biggus
biggus
3 years ago
Replied to wolf_Master

In such a wonky system, the people would be forcibly indoctrinated into thinking that might makes right from birth. much like how the USA creates patriotism in its people through the education system. Such a system would be put into place with a specific goal in mind such as defeating an humanity ending threat, or for the fat cats to keep their interests or assets. Otherwise there is no way such an anarchic system would be able to survive beyond a single generation without collapsing.

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Eye System

Eye System

Fantasy · Adam_A

biggus
biggus
4 years ago
Commented

My beak is the Beak that will pierce the heavins