Joel_Riven

Joel_Riven

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Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
2 months ago
Replied to LORDTEE

Thanks for the review here's my email joelenumah@gmail.com

Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
3 months ago
Replied to Kelvin_Sekwati

thanks for the honest review in the beginning I just wanted to just put something out without any prior writing experience later noticed how fast paced the book was I'll try slowing down and adding more details to make it more detailed and interesting

Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
3 months ago
Replied to DevilsArray

if you read more you'll find out I don't really mention the system that much which is why i made it a simulation system it's not mentioned much

Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
3 months ago
Posted

This is a nice story a well crafted storyline and characters eager to see how dragon lord and Yara bonds

Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
3 months ago
Commented

nice flashback Bryan's slow and low on confidence should've told her how he felt right there

Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
3 months ago
Commented

wow this is nice it's clear they still love each other and its's funny they both try to deny it 😂

Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
3 months ago
Posted

This is intriguing, love how the story develops and the writing quality is top notch keep it up author and please update more

Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
4 months ago
Replied to IMightStartLifting

Thanks for the review I started writing this book on a whim without any prior experience or thoughts of writing I just had an idea to put something I liked out for other's to enjoy if possible Looking back to my previous chapters, I've also seen how fast the book has progressed and I'll try slowing it down And if you have any ideas on what would be nice to add you could also let me know Thanks a lot and I hope you enjoy reading it

Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
4 months ago
Replied to IMightStartLifting

Yeah, that was when they felt he might not get the chance to be successful but I also wrote that they also supported him

Matthew's parents were overjoyed and proud of their son's achievement. They had always supported his passion for soccer, and now it seemed like all their sacrifices were paying off. They quickly scheduled a meeting with the Enyimba Football Club's representatives to discuss the details of the contract.

Rise of The Prodigy

Rise of The Prodigy

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Joel_Riven
Joel_Riven
4 months ago
Posted

this is a must read book I like that it's well written and I like the characters in it nice work author

  • The Revenant: The Necromancer's Vengeance original

    The Revenant: The Necromancer's Vengeance

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE

    **** In the kingdom of Eldoria, where power and corruption go hand in hand, a heinous act of violence sets a dark prophecy in motion. Young Alaric's peaceful life is shattered when imperial soldiers, under the emperor's command, slaughter his family and destroy his village to conceal a sinister secret. Left for dead amidst the ruins, Alaric awakens to a world forever changed, endowed with an unexpected and forbidden gift: necromancy. Driven by a burning desire for vengeance, Alaric discovers he can command the dead. With this newfound power, he raises an army of undead, bound by his will and fueled by his wrath. As he hones his dark arts, Alaric transforms from a grief-stricken boy into a formidable force, the master of death itself. His journey takes him through treacherous landscapes and into the heart of Eldoria’s political intrigue, where alliances are fragile, and trust is a luxury. Along the way, Alaric encounters allies who are drawn to his cause, each with their own reasons for opposing the emperor's tyranny. Together, they forge a path of rebellion, seeking to dismantle the corrupt regime that has plagued their land. But as Alaric's power grows, so does the darkness within him. Struggling to maintain his humanity, he must confront not only the emperor’s forces but also the moral cost of his vengeance. Will he succumb to the very evil he seeks to destroy, or will he rise above it to become the savior his people need? **"Rise of the Revenant: The Necromancer's Vengeance"** is a gripping tale of revenge, power, and redemption. It explores the thin line between justice and vengeance, and the transformative journey of a boy who wields death to reclaim life. In a world where the dead walk, the living must fight not only for survival but for the soul of their realm. The MC would be a little overpowered Book Cover by yuumeiart

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  • Rise of The Prodigy original

    Rise of The Prodigy

    Sports SYSTEM FASTPACED

    4.16

    _Book Title:_ Rise of the Prodigy _Book Description:_ Meet Matthew "Mate" Okoro, a 9-year-old football prodigy from Lagos, Nigeria, with a dream to conquer the pitch. Despite his parents' disapproval and a devastating injury, Matthew's talent and determination catch the attention of the mysterious Prodigy System. As Matthew embarks on a journey to become a world-class player, the Prodigy System guides him with a simulator, helping him overcome obstacles and improve his skills at an incredible rate. From the streets of Lagos to the pinnacle of European domination, Matthew's rise to stardom is a testament to his unwavering passion and dedication. With his versatility as a winger and occasional striker, Matthew proves himself to be a force to be reckoned with. But as he navigates the cutthroat world of professional soccer, he must confront his own doubts and fears to truly unleash his potential. _Rise of the Prodigy_ is a heartwarming and thrilling tale of self-discovery, perseverance, and the power of believing in oneself. Join Matthew on his inspiring journey as he chases his dreams and redefines what it means to be a football prodigy. _Genre:_ Young Adult Sports Fiction, Inspirational Fiction _Target Audience:_ Young adults and soccer enthusiasts of all ages

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