SanTS

SanTS

male LV 4

i changed my name.

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SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Replied to Choka

you have the same problem with your other novel too. like when Mc was talking with his slave, other high cultivation people talking with each other or weaker person. when any one of them talks like that it's very much unbecoming of them. It reduces their status /dignity and seriousness of any kind of situation.

SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Commented

You should stop using words like "wanna" and "cause" every other time. its very irritating and informal, I can't take any character seriously because of it.

SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Commented

what a surprise, I had no idea.

Meanwhile, the person wearing the mask removed his mask and hood, and the person turned out to be Yang Zhai.

A Man's Insanity: A Changing World

A Man's Insanity: A Changing World

Fantasy · BLACK_AMULET

SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Commented

thank god it's not Zhai Yang.

"I am Jaen Fen." Yang Zhai did not tell them his real name. 

A Man's Insanity: A Changing World

A Man's Insanity: A Changing World

Fantasy · BLACK_AMULET

SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Commented

ahhh....The cringe

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"Even if it does not work, and even if the world laughs at you, I will always be here by your side. Do you understand?"

Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel

Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel

Fantasy · Dere_Isaac

SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Replied to Choka

Yes he has free will, but as you said he's mcs slave. And there's nothing to force here, Mc will only be letting a slave know his place. If a slave will disobey Mc on a simple order like "don't ask questions, only do your work" then the slave contract is basically useless. Not just Robert, let's say Mc gets subordinates/slaves in future, will he go around explaing his every plans to them? why should he? their only job is to obey and mcs job is make them do that.

Mike realized that Robert is crucial for him to get stronger now and simply chose to tell him the reason since no one can control Robert except him anyway so it's totally safe to do so.

The way of the villain

The way of the villain

Fantasy · Choka

SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Commented

This Robert is mcs slav.e not his ally nor someone of equal status. Slav.es are to obey their masters only, not question them. MC should not be required to explain anything to his sla.ve. Disappointed.

Mike realized that Robert is crucial for him to get stronger now and simply chose to tell him the reason since no one can control Robert except him anyway so it's totally safe to do so.

The way of the villain

The way of the villain

Fantasy · Choka

SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Commented

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Mike realized that Robert is crucial for him to get stronger now and simply chose to tell him the reason since no one can control Robert except him anyway so it's totally safe to do so.

The way of the villain

The way of the villain

Fantasy · Choka

SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Commented

yeah genius, that's why you got betrayed by your "lover". Basic 3y old level mistake.

SanTS
SanTS
1 years ago
Commented

so, use all the money to buy formation flags? or use 30% to buy formation base?

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