[Status recovery]
A player in Jujutsu Kaisen
Anime & Comics · ThePpp_Pppp
[Status recovery]
A player in Jujutsu Kaisen
Anime & Comics · ThePpp_Pppp
[Status recovery]
A player in Jujutsu Kaisen
Anime & Comics · ThePpp_Pppp
[Status recovery]
A player in Jujutsu Kaisen
Anime & Comics · ThePpp_Pppp
why did you delete the next chapter i thought it was amazing?
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*relay
Batman after exiting the elevator brought me to His Batmobile and after starting to drive began asking me questions about my powers which I didn't rely all of the important stuff like my strongest ones.
Ben Ten X Dc
Anime & Comics · Leroy_Daft_4810
hit him with the
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remember the mission
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I looked at my contacts list when I sat down. All 4 of my contacts were beautiful girls aside from the ones added due to payments. Was someone pranking me? In middle school, I had 0 girls in my contacts list, but now I have 4, and all of them are popular or beautiful. Maybe I was overthinking again, but something was wrong. How could a loner like me get 4 girls' numbers without even trying? Was I the main character is some romance manga?
COTE: Hikigaya in Classroom of the Elite
Anime & Comics · avbutt
i think you should polish you grammar a little bit more and doing that should also clean up the dialog.
5. And finally, where do you think should I improve the most?, world building, writing, story development, character design..
Shallot's Dragon Ball
Anime & Comics · Nob7