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make = mate or can use "make babies" 👶 😏 😆 🤣 😂 joking
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Did I become an Elf?
Fantasy · ElvenHero
get some? or mine some? or gather some
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Did I become an Elf?
Fantasy · ElvenHero
tho = though depending on the characteristics of the MC, so far the story doesn't use slang words or maybe I missed them 😂🤣
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Did I become an Elf?
Fantasy · ElvenHero
but *may*= what are your names, or may I know your names?
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Did I become an Elf?
Fantasy · ElvenHero
Hiii, thanks for the chapter! Suggestions or reminders. Cap lock beginning of every sentence. I see you used it here and there, but try to make names, titles, or locations caplock so it stands out (Glade, Patriarch, or even the World Tree) Anyway, keep up the good work!
ch 40 Concealed Ice mage
Did I become an Elf?
Fantasy · ElvenHero
sit the = *here* or *there*
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Did I become an Elf?
Fantasy · ElvenHero
making the "please" what word go here?
"Attention please, we need to continue digging the pit we need for training and making the please. Please divide yourselves into three groups. 1 group will go to the pit and the other transport the soil to make a hill. The remaining group will start making a new bra for elven warriors with me" Lawrence announced
Did I become an Elf?
Fantasy · ElvenHero
below...some reason cant type there
Dammit, I was too eager to train and forgot about the time. It's still too early to come here. They were probably still deep asleep before I arrived. Alyana didn't even greet me and just went back to sleep naked after seeing it was me.
Did I become an Elf?
Fantasy · ElvenHero
what are you to the author of a certain novel of somewhat related characters' names? 😅🤣😂characters and background seem a bit similar. 2 half brothers (old and young), 1 blood related older sister, 1 little half sister. Both novels seem to be Royalties. MC mothered died let say due to the Queen cuz she is a maid/servant of the King. hopefully, this is different, and no, I have not read these chapters yet.
ch 0 1 DEEPLY HUG
PUS*Y HUNTER
Eastern · din_hamine