Finally a novel where the protagonist has the balls to reject someone
social credits up. ....
It's like what capitalists do to squeeze workers, Takuya thought.
Anime & Comics · Gered_Chuw
Your writing is fine but do try to maintain consistent character development as mc doesn't behave logically. Also the whole dungeon thing in gamer fics kills any tension and moreover this is a low tier world so I would rather the dungeon be less frequent....
I understand many people didn't like the last chapter but I'll have to repeat that I'm a newbie writer who's just trying to improve as he goes on. This is only the second fanfic I've written so I don't really know what readers like and what they don't. So I'm trying to improve every day.
Movies · WhiteAuthor
him making mistakes is not an issue but with how he chose intelligence over charisma, it should mean more and be more effective than its current portrayal. With how fast he can think, the 'I forgot to' excuse feels forced.
Tbh, I'm not very satisfied with this chapter but I wanted to make Jack someone who does make mistakes though whether my limited writing skills are managed well enough is another matter.
Movies · WhiteAuthor
this whole charisma check thing is getting old now......
"Of course not" Jack replied before turning his head and deciding to now answer anything else.
Movies · WhiteAuthor
but hyuga clan was also backward af and produced 0 s class ninja along with slavery.....
Both Might Guy and Rock Lee were inspired by the legendary martial artist Bruce Lee, especially with Rock Lee's Drunken Fist technique—a clear nod to Chinese culture. Then there was Neji Hyuga, a master of the Gentle Fist and Eight Trigrams, and Tenten, whose preference for wearing a qipao (Chinese dress) spoke volumes.
Anime & Comics · Emik01
he should just give up and leave the village.....
While Akira still had the strength to continue fighting, he didn't bother to argue about his loss. Why? Because if they kept going, Naruto might just use the Sexy Jutsu again, and that was something Akira knew he couldn't defend against. So, he decided to concede defeat.
Anime & Comics · Emik01
damn this fic is dead if he doesnt off her in next chapter lol
I am really waiting for the big payoff when karl just shows his true strength in front of all
As If Chinese authors could write this well…..
Author's Thoughts: HAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!! I was accused of plagiarism and that my fanfic was an MTL, the madman not only said I was plagiarizing but also didn't give credit to the original author. Although for some reason, he didn't leave the raw link to the novel I supposedly plagiarized.
[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince