kfdao

kfdao

male LV 15

I like badass female leads

2019-11-27 đã tham gia United States
Huy hiệu 12

Moments 16
kfdao
kfdao
1 years ago
Posted

story is good but instead using literal translations they could use pokemon names to make the story flow more smoothly. it frustrating that they use literal translations and Chang how they describe the pokemon six times per paragraph it seems

kfdao
kfdao
1 years ago
Commented

gun stupid. literal translations are really annoying

kfdao
kfdao
1 years ago
Commented

just call it krabby or Kingler please and thank you. no need for literal translation

kfdao
kfdao
1 years ago
Commented

Mr author please stop wasting word counts with your notes being as long as a chapter. if you need tonsay something please prepare a separate chapter for it

kfdao
kfdao
1 years ago
Commented

feels like the systems getting too involved in the story

kfdao
kfdao
1 years ago
Commented

the emotion cons are a annoying and break story flow

kfdao
kfdao
2 years ago
Posted

this story has good character development and world background setting. The story though does not develop at all. Author said slow but so far no real story. It just repeats the same slice of life arc over and over in different settings no real adventure and no focus on pokemon

kfdao
kfdao
3 years ago
Commented

well that is one heck of a start

kfdao
kfdao
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

kfdao
kfdao
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon