absolutely love this novel! i usually dont like to wait for updates on novels but i can totally wait for this one! in my opinion, everything about this is excellent! from the writing quality, to the story development, character design, updating stability, and world background! absolutely excellent I LOVE ITT!! cant say this enough!
now lets talk about the writing quality, personally i think the grammar is good and the way you insert lines is excellent, but this is just from my point of view, i am not a professional but from the letters to the syllables to the words to the grammar i think its absolutely excellent!
the story development is also good, i cant say much but i think its amazing, it doesnt feel too fast paced but it also doesnt feel slow, that it just makes you wanna drop the book. personally, the pace is just right i could totally reread this once its completed!
aa for the character designs, Noah(MC) is absolutely adorable! hes more unique compared to other bl novels ive read, also we cant forget about Levi(ML)! this wolf like gong i absolutely love it when hes being shameless, and also at times when he gets shamefully har-- ahem, i literally laugh from the chapters on this one, like in one chapter i get to laugh atleast three times! but it isnt all about the comedy, i absolutely enjoy the parts where Noah(MC) is being a detective and tries to find out who the killer is by little clues! it reminds me of detective conan! the character design for Blackie, Fynn, Trey, and the others are also unique! i absolutely love blackie and his dark humours really saying what i wanna say when i cant think of what to say! i totally ship Trey and Fynn, from the moment Trey was saying he was gay and etc. etc. again i wont say much because i may accidentally spoil it for new readers. but i want stories about them too inserted somewhere but not focused on them! like just mentioning some tidbits so we get some clue on whats happeing but it also wont affect the plot much and also not talking about them too much that i wont read about Noah(MC) and Levi(ML) anymore!
continuing, the updating stability is also good! but it gets a little slow sometimes but i understand you have your worries irl so it doesnt really matter as long as you still update and dont just drop the book! id be totally devastated and be depressed and wont trust books anymore.
and last but not least the World background! the background is really deep, it really makes me think if the Levi(ML) is an important person or a person with a high position, to the people who created Noah(MC) and them(this makes it sound like i know alot but i totally dont about the world background), or it could be totally unexpected when revealed and shock us so much! I wont say much unless i spoil it for people who havent read this yet but i think the background has more to it from the information given but idk im not really a person who overthinks sometimes so i kinda get lazy and just leave it up to reading and updates.
overall i think its good, the romance is just right and doesnt make us suffer by no dog food at all and make the relationship so ambiguous but makes no progress, Noah(MC) is doing a great job trying to figure out his feelings! rooting for you(MC&ML), the relationship also doesnt seem forced and on the contrary, make it seem sweet and bountiful! the comedy and romance and everything is really well balanced for me, it really makes my day!
also, this is my first time writing a review! author-san i gave my first review to you!💜 absolutely love your novel, (i'll try to give more ink next time after my current ink runs out because my mom scolded me for taking money from the credit card sigh~)
Anyway I absolutely recommend this novel if you have nothing to read and you like BL,
or if your sad because this has comedy in it! if you wanna eat dog food theres also romance here! everything you want is here! unless you arent a fujoshi ofcourse you can read at your own risk!
i will say it again! i absolutely love this novel and totally recommend it! if yall havent read it yet then yall are really losing out on this in my opinion. well that the end of my review! thanks for reading😊
absolutely love this novel! i usually dont like to wait for updates on novels but i can totally wait for this one! in my opinion, everything about this is excellent! from the writing quality, to the story development, character design, updating stability, and world background! absolutely excellent I LOVE ITT!! cant say this enough! now lets talk about the writing quality, personally i think the grammar is good and the way you insert lines is excellent, but this is just from my point of view, i am not a professional but from the letters to the syllables to the words to the grammar i think its absolutely excellent! the story development is also good, i cant say much but i think its amazing, it doesnt feel too fast paced but it also doesnt feel slow, that it just makes you wanna drop the book. personally, the pace is just right i could totally reread this once its completed! aa for the character designs, Noah(MC) is absolutely adorable! hes more unique compared to other bl novels ive read, also we cant forget about Levi(ML)! this wolf like gong i absolutely love it when hes being shameless, and also at times when he gets shamefully har-- ahem, i literally laugh from the chapters on this one, like in one chapter i get to laugh atleast three times! but it isnt all about the comedy, i absolutely enjoy the parts where Noah(MC) is being a detective and tries to find out who the killer is by little clues! it reminds me of detective conan! the character design for Blackie, Fynn, Trey, and the others are also unique! i absolutely love blackie and his dark humours really saying what i wanna say when i cant think of what to say! i totally ship Trey and Fynn, from the moment Trey was saying he was gay and etc. etc. again i wont say much because i may accidentally spoil it for new readers. but i want stories about them too inserted somewhere but not focused on them! like just mentioning some tidbits so we get some clue on whats happeing but it also wont affect the plot much and also not talking about them too much that i wont read about Noah(MC) and Levi(ML) anymore! continuing, the updating stability is also good! but it gets a little slow sometimes but i understand you have your worries irl so it doesnt really matter as long as you still update and dont just drop the book! id be totally devastated and be depressed and wont trust books anymore. and last but not least the World background! the background is really deep, it really makes me think if the Levi(ML) is an important person or a person with a high position, to the people who created Noah(MC) and them(this makes it sound like i know alot but i totally dont about the world background), or it could be totally unexpected when revealed and shock us so much! I wont say much unless i spoil it for people who havent read this yet but i think the background has more to it from the information given but idk im not really a person who overthinks sometimes so i kinda get lazy and just leave it up to reading and updates. overall i think its good, the romance is just right and doesnt make us suffer by no dog food at all and make the relationship so ambiguous but makes no progress, Noah(MC) is doing a great job trying to figure out his feelings! rooting for you(MC&ML), the relationship also doesnt seem forced and on the contrary, make it seem sweet and bountiful! the comedy and romance and everything is really well balanced for me, it really makes my day! also, this is my first time writing a review! author-san i gave my first review to you!💜 absolutely love your novel, (i'll try to give more ink next time after my current ink runs out because my mom scolded me for taking money from the credit card sigh~) Anyway I absolutely recommend this novel if you have nothing to read and you like BL, or if your sad because this has comedy in it! if you wanna eat dog food theres also romance here! everything you want is here! unless you arent a fujoshi ofcourse you can read at your own risk! i will say it again! i absolutely love this novel and totally recommend it! if yall havent read it yet then yall are really losing out on this in my opinion. well that the end of my review! thanks for reading😊
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LGBT+ · LucyPanDora