SpiritSiren

First-time reader prediction. Maxwell and Mariane were soulmates. Marianne was the murderer. Maxwell wanted the thrown more than anything and knew that since Marianne loved him to death, she would do as he asked. After killing the king, Maxwell killed her.

I believe it is now time to point out the problems, perhaps flaws with this book. 1. Very misleading title. We have had barely 5 chapters with Luxs supposed "Girl friend." Now, this isn't necessarily bad if it was the only thing I disliked. However, 2.Too Large Scaled. we went from College Classroom to portals to whole galaxy. there is way too much going on. If we were going to get to this scale, it should have been set up at the beginning, or at least 200 chapters in when we are done on earth. And finally, 3. Power Scaling. The very beginning makes it appear that Lux is the highest power level attainable. Not "the highest potential to get there." This, for me, is the last straw. My hope was that through all this, Lux would be the "strongest" no matter what. Anyone or anything introduced can not compare to Lux. With this statement, Lux is literally middle, if not the bottom of the pack. This book had 3 interesting points going in: 1. The main character has a Dragon girl friend 2. It's on Earth, at a college, no less. 3. Lux is The Literally Strongest "God." Now, 60 chapters in, it has lost 2 of these with the last being nowhere in sight. it's hard to get excited to read more, knowing that it (I'm not saying this to be mean I'm saying this because I genuinely cared) has become generic. Stories with fantasy creatures and Abilitys are nothing new, so the application must be new. Having a very powerful protagonist is something new. It is on earth, and only the earth is new. Someone will probably say or state, "It gets better as you read." If it was free, I would give it the chance. Right now, however I can't justify to myself to spend money on it.

Author, what the heck. does she love him or hate him?

Good Lord, She's been raped twice, and she's not even 16...

Ah yes, the woman I treated disrespectfully to the point of not considering her worth more than a gardening tool, whom I got pregnant against her will and have also rapes doesn't like me... the worst part is that I've meet someone like this. utterly disgusting and shameless.

I'll give the author credit. He/she is very good at showing a true hypocrite. in a sense, it's refreshing. Quite a few main characters when they commit crimes are treated as if nothing happened. not this one.

I'll admit I'm rather disappointed. this is such a cliche moment.

I've been hoping we would meet him soon. We have not heard from him in many chapters.

2 Words? Maybe in the original language.