Why the sudden written POV change?…Please change back! Not a big fan of mixing the writing styles!
… so she heard the stomping but not the screams?
"Hey, Kent! What's with all that noise in your room? Are you practising kung-fu or did you lose your mind?"
Fantasy · NF_Stories
Is his emotional/mental instability going to get better? Or does it just continue?
"Hey! Don't just throw weird glowing stuff at me and stay quiet!" He yelled, waving his hand in frustration.
Fantasy · NF_Stories
Doesn’t his sister Nima ever notice him, with all the screaming? I mean, they are supposed to live in a cheap house where the walls are obviously very thin!
"What the—?!" Kent shouted, stumbling backwards onto his creaky bed.
Fantasy · NF_Stories
Pretty sure that isn’t what a villain is…
A villain is just a hero whose side of the story you weren't told, but now, Raze would tell it himself, and he would tell it the right way.
Fantasy · DepressedMage
So there will be multiple FLs?
How does the world setup look? Is it modern, medieval or Victorian era?
Hope there are others who can use duel elements, otherwise his cover is blown since only [Hope] could use multiple elements!
Question, why didn’t the hero association retrieve it and his weapon? Doesn’t the new hero need it for show before the public?
Additionally, I couldn't even use my [Inventory Ring] in public either, because it was the rarest of rare artifacts, valued so highly that you could probably buy part of Frostvile Mountain with it.
Fantasy · itsron
Wasn’t it September? Because school started.
It was midsummer, at the peak of the sun's intensity, and only the faint sound of cicadas could be heard near the bungalow.
Rebirth: Slice-of-life Cultivation
Urban · The courtyard has good sunlight.