James_loren

James_loren

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2019-08-29 đã tham gia Global
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James_loren
James_loren
4 months ago
Commented

Being*

Legally speaking, I was bring 'homeschooled' by Clark—though, he wasn't really going to teach me math or anything like that.

Marvel/DC: Scion Of A Regent [Viltrumite OC]

Marvel/DC: Scion Of A Regent [Viltrumite OC]

Anime & Comics · AceOfCrowns

James_loren
James_loren
1 years ago
Commented

How does he know all this

Wukong looked at the blond boy and stared at him. This man was also interesting. His most notable moment, which hadn't happened yet, was when he froze all of hell. Sun Wukong burst into laughter the first time he witnessed it. Although this boy's ice powers had a slow start, and some may argue that he wasted the ability in his younger years, seeing as how he's an Omega-level mutant, he does learn the full extent of his powers. In due time.

Monkey King in Marvel

Monkey King in Marvel

Anime & Comics · _MYSTERY

James_loren
James_loren
1 years ago
Commented

didn’t he just say he’ d do this missions alone

"So you will come with me?" I asked

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Anime & Comics · N9Lxv3

James_loren
James_loren
1 years ago
Commented

Month*

'Oh boy, how wrong was I. It almost took a mouth to just spit out the ball. Just imagine how long it took to teach the curse how to store itself'

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Anime & Comics · N9Lxv3

James_loren
James_loren
1 years ago
Commented

and also do not due

"A fifteen-year-old fighting like an experienced sorcerer. This must've been your first time facing a curse user to get used to this sensation. There's a lot more of us in the shadow waiting for an opportunity to be free & due what we desire." He declared collapsing on his back.

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Anime & Comics · N9Lxv3

James_loren
James_loren
1 years ago
Commented

Could’ve worded that a lot better too for example “this must’ve been your first time fighting a curse user, we’ll get used to it because …ect”

"A fifteen-year-old fighting like an experienced sorcerer. This must've been your first time facing a curse user to get used to this sensation. There's a lot more of us in the shadow waiting for an opportunity to be free & due what we desire." He declared collapsing on his back.

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Anime & Comics · N9Lxv3

James_loren
James_loren
1 years ago
Commented

Could’ve worded that better like “I’m going to kill you and that little girl to send a msg…ect…” obviously write msg properly but yh

"Because they are weak & because it's fun. Looking at their face before they die provides me enjoyment. But now it's about to be Twenty - three people." He said as he released his bloodlust. "You & that little girl I will kill. Just to send a little warning to jujutsu high that I'm not a sorcerer who a bunch of brats can take care of." The sorcerer answered.

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Anime & Comics · N9Lxv3

James_loren
James_loren
1 years ago
Commented

When using this - make sure it’s connected for example ‘kami-sama’ makes it smooth and if it’s it can come off as stumbling on your word or hesitating

"I'll be fine Kamo - Kun there's a low chance of a curse getting me from the sky. You be safe as well even though I know you be ok. You are grade 2 after all." Momo says as she started flying in the air.

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Anime & Comics · N9Lxv3

James_loren
James_loren
1 years ago
Commented

You should’ve put the comma between “i see” and “continue” and this was meant for the other chapter but you’ve put ‘two’ instead of ‘too’ twice last chapter apart from that you’re improving just need to be more careful wit h grammar and punctuality you’re writing will get better over time so don’ rush it

"I see continue, what's the problem?" Principal Gakuganji requested stroking his beard.

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Bloodline || Jujutsu kaisen

Anime & Comics · N9Lxv3

James_loren
James_loren
1 years ago
Replied to NappyAfro

I swear you Batman meatriders will do anything but fault him

I stop that thought as fast as it came. That was the Jason part of me thinking, but I can't let that get out of control. I don't want to be some rich guys little sidekick again. He obviously couldn't even save us when we needed him.

Red Hood: You Only Live Twice

Red Hood: You Only Live Twice

Anime & Comics · Papa_Smurf_2755