Just put some time skips between the partes and maybe some reactions tô death note and the twitter Just tô make them fell more real
So, here's the thing: I want to know your thoughts. Should I rewrite those chapters to make them more engaging and detailed? If I do, it will take some time, but I'm committed to improving the story if that's what you want.
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'I'm going to marry Shisui, we'll hold hands and have children when we grow up,' Azula's thoughts gradually wandered to what she understood, but she soon tried to whiten her mind.
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on First sight Locks cool on a Second sight IS that leg broken?
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a indicator for pov changer would be Nice here
As I sat nervously at a corner table in the bustling café, I saw him walk in. He was just a boy—15 years old—but there was something extraordinary about him. Despite his age, he had an air of quiet authority, his posture relaxed yet assertive. He held a red cloth, a curious and unexpected accessory that seemed to signify a mind always at work.
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90% of his transformations are human like so training in human form make a good base for his forms
As the training session continued, Ben's determination only grew stronger. His movements became more fluid, more precise, but also more taxing. Sweat dripped down his face, and his breathing grew heavier with each exercise.
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3 chapters building a Full Pc to use a laptop?
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If a alien make a toaster IS alien tech so ALL that Gray matter make from Scratch IS alien tech
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How make It not betray him? simple FEAR
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Now, wait, you guys might be wondering what's the deal. Idiot, it's freaking Marvel with superheroes! Yay, okay, but do you get it? I've lived here for the past 15 years as a normal teen with a loving family. And now I know this world is in deep shit—trouble after trouble, and a freaking purple bald monkey will snap his fingers to kill half the population, including my family. Ha, shit. Anyway, I'll think of it later.
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i am not talking about physical training i am talking of combat training martial arts If he learn that in his base ALL forms can use on some extent but If he learn as jetray the moves Will fell awkward in other forms
As the training session continued, Ben's determination only grew stronger. His movements became more fluid, more precise, but also more taxing. Sweat dripped down his face, and his breathing grew heavier with each exercise.
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