KayyRo

KayyRo

female LV 5

Casual reader, outdoor enthusiast, art & photography lover, also a hobby author. I am currently writing a novel: "Lost in Time; Battlefront" if you have time please check it out and comment. Thanks :)

2019-08-01 đã tham gia United States
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KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
Replied to senshiAuthor

Awesome :)

KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
Replied to Nr_Yet1208

Yeah -_- typos on typos and issues with my sentences. I had a completely different concept when I first started and didn't even plan to keep writing, but now I'm happy with where it's gone. I just have to fix all the issues from the start. I appreciate all your comments :)

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Lost in Time; Battlefront

Lost in Time; Battlefront

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KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
Replied to Nr_Yet1208

Noted, thank ya :)

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Lost in Time; Battlefront

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KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
Replied to Nr_Yet1208

Thanks 👍🏻

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Lost in Time; Battlefront

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KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
Replied to Nr_Yet1208

Yeah, makes sense. In the later chapters and in volume 2, I have changed some descriptions and noticed some inconsistencies after I started to be able to really picture them as completed characters. Thanks for the in put.

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Lost in Time; Battlefront

Lost in Time; Battlefront

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KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
Replied to Nr_Yet1208

Thanks, there are somethings I still need to fix.

KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
Replied to Nr_Yet1208

Yeah, I honestly struggled with the concept of the story at the start and haven't gone back to fix something things. I have been planning to redo a few chapters at the start and go back and fix some typos. (I do a lot on my phone so I don't always catch things like I would on my laptop).Thanks for the review.

KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
Replied to senshiAuthor

thank you for the review

KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
Posted

Soooo yeah, I'm hooked and want to know what's next :) I only read a few chapters (lunch break ended early)but I added it to my list so I can finish the chapters that are out. I enjoyed how descriptive you were and could fully picture what was going on once she woke up. I enjoyed what I read and can't wait to read more. Keep it up :)

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KayyRo
KayyRo
2 years ago
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I like what I have read so far :) I made sure to add it to my list so I can keep up with the story. I am looking forward to what is yet to come.

  • Lost in Time; Side Stories & Fillers original

    Lost in Time; Side Stories & Fillers

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE COMEDY WEAKTOSTRONG

    ** This is NOT a stand-alone novel; it contains side stories, fillers, history, and more relating to the main novel- "Lost in Time; Unforgiven" ** :) Hello reader(s), this story will relate to the main novel, (as mentioned above), and may contain some chapters that are unintentional "spoilers." Carefully read the title and brief description at the start of the chapters to avoid any confusion. The chapters will give more insight into how things came about in their world and includes side stories and the equivalent of "filler episodes" that I don't feel are needed to understand the main novel, but I still want to write and upload. (I may do a couple chapters where I am just describing things about the characters themselves but it won't be very often.) I hope anyone reading enjoys these chapters and if you have a question about something, leave a comment on the main novel or one of these chapters and I'll do my best to answer. ^-^ Anyways, that should be enough information for now. As always, feel free to comment, like, or review; it means a lot to a writer :) Stay safe and take care reader(s)

    15 Chs 3 sưu tầm

  • Lost in Time; Battlefront original

    Lost in Time; Battlefront

    Fantasy WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY DARK SURVIVAL BETRAYAL REVENGE BEAUTY SUPERNATURAL TWISTED

    *There is "gore, bloody, violent" content throughout the story that may bother or not be suitable for some readers. As well as some crude language.* Also #action/adventure "Wren... can you hear me..?" His voice sounded so familiar and warm. ".."Please Wren... I know the last person you probably want to hear from is me.. "Please don't forget.. It's me, Michael.." As soon as Wren hear his name, memories came flashing back to her. *Wren-Wren, come play with me!" A young boy with brown hair and sea blue eyes called out to her. "Okay, I'm coming." The young Wren ran towards Michael. Her dark red hair that had been neatly styled into braids, bounced around on her shoulders. *BANG! BOOM, BOOM!* The loud sounds of gun and canon fire could be heard all around. "AH!" Men and women were screaming in the distance. The once inviting forest vegetation was now littered with debris from nearby buildings and stained red with blood. "Mommy! Mommy, *cough cough* help m-" before the blonde little girl could continue screaming for her mother, I large hand reached down and covered her mouth. She tried to struggle, but it was all in vain. The man easily overpowered her and quickly ran off. ..."Presenting our new Priestess! She has incredible strength and amazing abilities only second to our Lord, Lord Valen. Everyone, please do your best to welcome her!" A teenaged age Wren stood before many people within a large ballroom style area. To her left was the one she knew as Valen, and over to her right, there was a man and woman who looked less than pleased to see her in a position of such power. Wren was nervous and shaking. 'I really wish I could just get out of this dress and go train," She thought to herself. ..."21, check in. Are we a go?" Someone's voice came across a small earpiece, "We are good 45. You take the East entrance and I will cover the perimeter. We need to do this as quickly and silently as possible." Wren was in her late teens at this point. She was wearing all black clothes, that were fitted to the curves of her body. She heard a small sound in the distance, 'Okay, here we go.' She took a deep breath in and closed her eyes. In just moments her clothes and hair began to flutter around her body, and just as quickly as this happened, she disappeared, leaving nothing but a small wisp of smoke behind. ..."Wren, I just can't...I need to go for myself. I never wanted to keep this from yo-" "Don't bother lying to me Michael. I am fed up with what both you and Valen have been hiding." She carefully swung her leg over, and moved away from Michael's lap, carefully adjusting her jade-colored dress. She sighed into her hands, "Wren..you know I will always lo-" "Goodbye Michael. I regret we didn't have more time together, but I can't just sit by idly." She turned to face him, a tear ran down her face, and she disappeared, before Michael opened his eyes from a blink. Suddenly, Wren gasped and opened her eyes. She immediately sat up, turned on her side, and began to cough and spit out blood. "Oh Wren, gosh I missed you," As Wren was turning to lay back down, Michael pulled her into a tight embrace. "I don't know what I would have done without you. You were in this bed so long, I didn't think you would ever wake up." Wren was confused and still trying to catch her breath. She pushed the man away and looked him over. 'Wavy brown hair, simple stud earrings, sea blue eyes..' "Michael?" "Oh, my Lady-" Michael grabbed her once more, but he quickly released her, "Daddy, daddy, can I see, can I see?" Wren grew even more confused, as Michael moved his body over and behind him, was a small girl, with cherry brown hair. "Hi lovely. I would like you to meet someone. This Lady, is a very important person to our people, and she is also really special to us." Wrens breaths began to quicken and her heart was racing, 'no, don't!" "This Lady's name is Wren, but maybe after you are around her more, maybe you can start calling her Mommy again?"

    64 Chs 11 sưu tầm

  • Just to Pass the Time original

    Just to Pass the Time

    Fantasy ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY MYSTERY SCARY

    *There will be gore and violent content in some of the stories; various topics such as mental illnesses, abuse(verbal/physical), negative stereotypes, etc.; as well as some crude language that may bother or not be suitablefor some readers.* (I will put a warning on the chapters where it is more pronounced.) This will be a collection of short stories that I have written over the years. There will be some stories with male leads and other with female leads. Some stories will be fantasy, mystery, realistic fiction, LGBTQ+, science fiction, slice of life, and more. If some are "popular" enough and any reader likes the story, I can create a "sequel" or just extend the story a bit. Anyways, I'll leave a brief description before the start of each story and the chapter titled will really be the title of the short story. Hopefully anyone reading enjoys :)

    5 Chs 1 sưu tầm