Webnovel Author: Opasiris - Novel Collection

For now I really like the development that the protagonist has had in his mental areas, even though I would have liked the training arc to be longer and more detailed since it was super important and I really wouldn't get bored reading how little by little he improves not only in his martial arts if not also in his mental faculties. I really like the current relationship he has with Raven, it gives that extra humorous touch to the novel.

Me gustó bastante la estructura del desarrollo del protagonista y la forma en que sus relaciones con los demás integrantes del canon va mejorando, es interesante ver tus planes. Puedo decir que hasta ahora tu novela es muy buena y me encanta que el protagonista a pesar de ser op, no lo sea instantáneamente.