Brammm

i think there might have been a mistake during translation a griffin is a beast with a lions body and an eagles head .

i think he is using his telekinisis or earth control to control the alloy and use it as a weapon

he is not spending the alloy just using it, of course this does create the risk of it being stolen or lost

how does carmins use of the bloodline work is it a temperary benifit or a permamanet boost i also recall giving/losing blood is not the same as giving your bloodline so did jake give carmen his bloodline or just his blood

im very curious what dou's shun long comprehended in his past life

all experiences between them are shared thats why the copy can be used to study insription while the original learns to fight.

i think your story is great. as for ideas i think you could incorperate the difrent levels of hell into diffrent abileties. for example aperently one level of hell is frozen which could give an ice abiletie

this chapter leaves me with 2 questions was the 4th active abilety ever revealed(i cant remember reading about it) and the same question for the peak abilety

even is she had a good reasen i hope she isnt just forgiven without redeeming herself first (as in either repaying the debt of soulstones or risking her life to save jake in an ordeal)