Izaah

Pretty interesting so far. The grammar has some errors, but it is readable despite english not being my native language. The idea of using Elden Ring as a deck of cards in YuGiOh is quite original and reminds me of that Heroic Spirit card fanfic, although the direction of the story is entirely different. Miquella is my favorite character so far and the MC is decent, I like how he helped Jaden and he seems smart. Since there are only 11 chapters so far, I can't say much more, but it was really fun to read, I hope more people can read this fanfic and that the author doesn't drop it.

I'm giving four stars cuz it have only five chapters until the moment i'm makin that review. It's rare to find a Danganronpa fic, and this one looks good. The MC seems a bit bland, but it's not bad. It also doesn't have many grammar mistakes that make it difficult to read, the pacing of the story is good too. Keep up the good work.