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Yes, but it's more fit to call him a Pariah since the effect he had is way stronger than what could a simple Blank could produce.
When he asked to put into words, Syntax made a good euphemism by saying "How would you feel looking at a human without a face, at someone without presence, at a void figure that doesn't reassemble at a anything around it? That's how I feel about you. That's how 'wrong' you are."
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Part of him is a Pariah.
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Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Yes.
ch 0 3 A new beginning
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
that was pretty much their formation, and yep those cannibals were part from the cannibal expansion mod.
"COME YOU FUCKIN BASTARDS, LET ME PAINT MYSELF IN YOUR BLOOD TOO!" I shouted with pure rage as a scrawny cannibal rushed at me.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Yeah, pretty much.
This however didn't last long, as another bandit was quickly dealt with from a curvy figure that seemed to be a companion of the mysterious swordman. The bandit head and forearm rolling in the ground as she moved towards another victim.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Although I have an idea of what I would like as the Nation Name, I'm open to ideas if they are better. And about the clans, well, they need some rename before even trying to adopt their clan names (I've already spoiled in the characters sheet)
His mind, or better said, his circuits were once again running wild with his plans and ambition. Knowing that they were starting from the scratch here, he dare to dream in greatness for his companions.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Then she motioned with her right hand "And this lady here is Hatsune Minami, we would be the ones that talk with you all if that's not much." She asked while giving a small but nervous smile.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Asa
"Before we continue with this conversation, I wish to present ourselves, my name is Shigure Asa, and I'm the wife of the village Chief." The lady raised her voice as she motioned with her hand to her left.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Rumiii
One of the group had an ashamed blush on her face. Sabine assumed she was the one who snorted. She also appeared to be the leader of the group given the way the rest of the Abhumans seemed to defer to her. She had skin the color of milk chocolate, white hair (including her rabbit ears), and red eyes. She was attractive, Sabine noted, in a sort of 'masculine-femininity' way. The flimsy yellow top she wore looked more like swimwear than clothing but it revealed the woman's toned musculature and hugged her assets, leaving very little to the imagination. The same could be said about those denim shorts she wore and the shredded thighs that were under them.
Video Games · Daddy
😂
'Blonde woman!? Crap it seemed that they've been here before.' Otto suddenly worried knowing his fellow villager attitude and how the samurai seemed to be petty against her. Still, he raised his head again and nodded towards them while quickly jumping at his carriage, and soon after, leaving the battle zone.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
"Beep thinks this was easy! Spiders are harder than them!" he suddenly heard the mysterious swordman beep with a joyful voice, seemingly uncaring of the butcher that he delivered today.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Btw this is a Komusō, so you can imagine Beep.
The Komusō Samurai and his gang.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
way better than gene stealers
Paradoxically, Sabine relaxed a bit now that she could see the threat, "Ah, a Catachan Devil… I wonder if it hitched a ride here on some ship or if some idiot tried to introduce it to this Hive for some nonsense reason…"
Video Games · Daddy
oh fuck don't tell me there's also genestealers there💀
Both of them tried their best to put the morbid contents of this cavernous room out of their minds. And in the process of trying to find anything else to focus on, Sabine started to hear something off coming from inside the walls. It sounded like the skittering of some kind of large creature or insect, interspersed with a harsh hissing sound that chilled even Sabine's battle-hardened blood.
Video Games · Daddy
Eventually, Octus' delirious mumbles got to Sabine. They were as entertaining as they were worrying. He was saying things she could barely make out. Like things about the "spooky skelly man" and "evil space chicken" and other complete nonsense that Sabine couldn't make heads or tails from. In particular, he kept going on about "Sisters in thigh highs" and "holy zettai ryoiki"… Whatever that meant.
Video Games · Daddy
There's this thing that I believe would help you ","
ch 14 Chapter 14 Little Spider
Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
Tenrai Ryūji: A 15 years old greenlander from Okran's Valley, lost his farm during a cannibal attack. He became a cannibal hunter since young age and formed his own squadron after saving Manin in the cannibal plains.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Toro: A bull that joined the group while travelling towards the Shek Kingdom, unofficially the real fifth member. He's pretty much calm for a bull and his size. He likes to sleep a lot.
Anime & Comics · Xerstoren
Overall a good fanfic. The characters are well build (Although there's a clear bias for the females) and their interactions ain't weird. Though there's a clear lack of description of their appareances that need to be adressed if the author is thinking on adding more characters later on. The main cast is believable in their context as they fit with the image you may have of saiyans. The world building is okay, it could improve with more rich and livelier details in the description but I can understand that the author, just like myself, don't have english as his first language. There's something that need to be adressed as the atmosphere in the novel isn't grim dark enough. Which is the characteristic seal of warhammer. The update rate is good, which is something I would've wished to had to before (Sorry if there's any reader of my FF, I promise I'll finish them) Now something that really bothered me is that at some point in the novel is clear that either the author rushed or something happened. They way that the novel was heading it was clear that the main cast childhood would've be expanded. This would have been great since a lot of characters in the novel could have shared more spotlight while also adding more difficulty to the Saiyans path. This would have given other saiyans more chances to be in the spotlight and further develop their personalities for us the readers to empathise or hate. While also giving more world buildings to their planet. Something I would recommend the author, it's for showing more what is going on instead of telling. Those actions, conversations and interactions shouldn't be wasted by just passing by in some paragraphs, but further develop and show us the readers. Although it's a more personal recommendation since I love slice of life. Overall, is a solid read among the sea of crap that is the fanfiction zone currently. Although it has it weakness such as the clear lack of deepness into the lore of Warhammer, its nothing too serious to affect the read. Although I would recommend the author to get his ass to work and read what is needed since id the plot thickens, so should be his knowledge. And for those that reached here, and still have some doubts or concerns, just give it a try and see it for yourself, trust me you won't immediately quit after the first chapter. That's all I think, have a good night and cya!
Saiyan in Warhammer
Anime & Comics · SrDevoxero