Webnovel Author: Count_Daath - Fanfic&Novel Collection

I have been noticing a worrying trend on Webnovel recently that authors having their main characters reincarnated in younger bodies, but not addressing what that means for the MC's psychology. Which leads to what I call the ped0 problem of MCs being attracted to minors when they are mentally adults. This fic for example has the MC who I'd assume was at least in his mid twenties thirsting for a damn pre-teen. To me this is behavior you should never condone, because if you do you become part of the problem of people slowing either unintentionally or intentionally making ped0philia normal in the eyes of consumers. if it wasn't for this fact I'd Rank this fanfic pretty well, because its grammar and pacing is above average (8.5/10).

The writing quality is okay and thats all ot has going for it really, but I can't continue reading this story. The MC is a pedo, he's creeping on a child as a full grown adult, so what if he's in a child's body, it still doesn't make it right. I could have been okay with it if the overly apparent crush came along latter and not when there still in middle school. I repeat again, this is a FULL GROWN ADULT. creeping on a CHILD.

Nothing really exciting, the writing quality is great, but that's all you can really give this story. This is not to say I didn't see something in this story, but I'll be honest Superman's negligence of Superboy was some of the best ways superman ever showed his humanity. Sure it sucked for Superboy, but eventually they grew together and became like brothers of close uncle and nephew relationship. This story decides to portray Superman as a deadbeat dad, and I find that to be dumb. Realize something people if Kara was in the universe she'd hate Superboy, at least Superman is taking it as best he can with what could only be the birth of a human rights violation. So to the author I have to drop this story, because who in their right minds chooses Black Canary over Superman?

You can't even bother to add at least a chapter describing his radical change from scientist to hitman. He was a scientst not some omni prodigy. Also you also mad him to good at everything, you think Dr. Erskine wouldn't notice such a balant perfectionists, he would very easily and very quickly come to not trust you because who would trust something that good in his circumstances. Also props for trying to create a no cheat character, but in a universe full of people far smarter, stronger, and better than you, don't try to use real world level geniuses when your nothing compared to Peter Parker not to mention people like Dr. Doom & Mr. Fantastic, your not even on the same level of intelligence as them when they were still in high school much less adults.

The first chapter was great, but as soon as we went to the rebirth things went downhill fast. This is not Alduin, this is as best some recovering crackhead with some partial memories and powers. I don't want to waste my brain cells reading a crack-fic.

Has to be one of the best fate fanfics I've ever read, definitely in the top 5. It isn't a very serious story, but the plot and action is always great. If I had to describe this story it would be this: The absurdity of one punch man syrength translated to magic with a dash of seriousness.