Short af
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I'd say the lack of goal for the mc makes it feel slow
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you repeated a few paragraphs
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Another group of Amazons stands waiting at the mouth of the cave, an equal number of those "escorting" you. The leader of their group is a raven-haired woman, helmet tucked into her side. She looked to be older than the unnaturally youthful Amazons you had so far encountered, though no less beautiful. Though she wore nothing to mark her out from those around her, the way the others stood just behind and the regal bearing of how she carried herself, she is clearly someone of importance.
Young Titan (DC)
Anime & Comics · DevionKing
great quality compared to this site. Try posting this on rr or qq. well done hope you continue. For new readers the 2nd person point of view is only jarring for a little while.
an extra "H to"
The Potter scion liked to distance himself from the man. He liked to think that they were two different people, even if the two of them tended to overlap. Perhaps it was a desperate attempt to not H to share the man's fate, and if it meant having a shard of immaturity left in him, then it was a price he was willing to pay.
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
Asmongler?
All until today, that is. As I was watching yet another video of a balding dude, a pop-up suddenly appeared in the middle of my screen, forcing the video to a stop.
Terror Infinity: Monster
Anime & Comics · SlyOW
If he lets Zeus and Poseidon abuse women while knowing what they'll do and having the power to stop them he's just as bad as them.
I don't like the direction this is going. Loki is taking more and more of a backseat and that is boring.
Barely humanish.