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Wohohohoh I need More Chapters!!!!

2019-03-10 đã tham gia Global
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1 days ago
Commented

"Wait, only two years younger? So, he died at 17? I’m not sure if the author is trying too hard to make the main character’s past tragic, but what I feel is that the main character is a lazy masochist with no sense of pride. So young, yet he's already given up. As long as he can become an actor, he’s willing to be a pet for the yakuza. Honestly, the main character is a disgusting young man. He’s still young, but he doesn’t want to put in any effort, complaining about not having money for lessons without even considering a part-time job."

My name is Akira Hoshino. I was 15, somehow. Two years younger than I remembered.

A Star Reborn In Tokyo

A Star Reborn In Tokyo

Anime & Comics · TSOKyoto

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1 days ago
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well it's already chapter 3, and nothing interesting happen. optis already become OC and weakened the system is smug annoying type

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6 days ago
Commented

change the topic to the point people don't understand what she talking about

Hoshinomiya casually changed the topic and asked, "So, why did Hikigaya-kun talked to me? Was it because he's really into the teacher?"

COTE: Hikigaya Hachiman In The Classroom Of The Elite

COTE: Hikigaya Hachiman In The Classroom Of The Elite

Anime & Comics · JYouyi

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7 days ago
Commented

I finally understand why I've started losing interest in reading this story. The main character no longer retains fragments of the original Hikigaya The logic monster who wasn’t afraid to be the scapegoat to achieve optimal results with minimal effort. Essentially, the main character has completely transformed into an OC (Original Character) here. You could even say that the main character in this story is not interesting at all—what he does is too blatant and other people just to dumb to counter him

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24 days ago
Commented

well I'm not a fan of the filmmaking process, so I'm starting to get bored with this story. Bored might not be the right word—it's more that I'm not interested in the filmmaking process. I was looking forward to the reactions to the finished work, but I feel like the reactions given were too dull.

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1 months ago
Commented

Ehhh, after the character development in the Land Between, he ends up wanting to be a hero again just because his mother said so. It seems he failed to learn anything there.

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1 months ago
Replied to UncrownedKing

well I know, but this story was translated into English. I hope the translator can be more diligent and change the Chinese accents back to Japanese.

Looking at the dead body that Kurumi pointed at, Takashi Komuro hurriedly shook his head. "No, no, no. We will listen to Senior Sister."

Kurumi Tokisaki's Planar Journey

Kurumi Tokisaki's Planar Journey

Anime & Comics · nyawdao2

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1 months ago
Posted

There are too many exaggerated words. If it were just a few, I might still enjoy the story. However, when an entire paragraph is filled with over-the-top expressions, it becomes annoying. Combined with a slow-paced plot, it makes for an uncomfortable reading experience. I am interested in this story, but your writing style needs improvement. I am not a writer, so I can't offer helpful tips and tricks for writing. However, this is my honest opinion after reading several chapters of your story.

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1 months ago
Replied to Shadow_XL

Yes, I feel the same way. At least now I realize that for stories involving reincarnation, transmigration, and similar themes, I am not interested in the main character's past.

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1 months ago
Commented

Ahhh, I am very disappointed when they add Chinese elements to a Japanese story. Will they adapt all original stories to Chinese themes? If so, I don't want to waste my time reading this story.

Unfortunately, he didn't understand these dances at all, and the images he found online were very blurry.

Dad's Comic Life

Dad's Comic Life

Anime & Comics · michaeI