man I'm reading this fanfic on the same site from two different accounts after it was rewritten this other person or author started posting so the other account has about 42 chapters and from what I saw the story and myself I don't know if the author and the same or different people
ch 13 Chapter 13: Encounter
Anime & Comics · Arsone
The protagonist practically revealed his identity he shouldn't go back to the navy since the world government is going after him and if they don't find out it was him and don't go after him it's illogical this fanfic
ch 33 Volume 2 Chapter 4
Anime & Comics · Crazibrains_
You should separate the characters' lines everything together gets very confusing
ch 0 5 The revolutionary Dragon
Anime & Comics · david_bierz
This chapter is old but I agree every time I read it it seems like I'm getting dumber
ch 19 Fond Memories
Anime & Comics · JOJO99
The only bad thing about this fanfic is that the chapters are very time consuming, the rest is Incredible
ch 0 6 Not Always What It Seems
Anime & Comics · EndlessAbaddon
Dude it doesn't look like it's going in a good direction this fanfic is going too fast
ch 98 Chapter 98 The source of energy
Anime & Comics · Feverflow
1 keep looks pretty interesting
Chương này đã bị xóa
Anime & Comics · Aht
Finalmente
ch 0 1 Spending Karma Points
Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin
you are changing the original so much that you have to be careful not to spoil it
ch 71 Chapter 71 Piccolo is completed
Anime & Comics · Feverflow
The previous chapter for me was the best in my opinion the characters expressed themselves well and their conversations didn't seem out of place the bit of comedy with the clerk was good too
ch 0 7 Important as hell. Read it.
My Life Sucks, No Kidding [An Anime-verse Story]
Anime & Comics · ManofcultureQ_Q