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Sorry i meant realistic not accurate- my bad for writing comments at 3am and 4 hours of sleep, i say as though I’m not doing the exact thing right now. Anyway, The death toll is realistic being so high since people are more likely to die at the start if a diaster is what i mean

That’s i think a really accurate number. Most death occur dueing the start of a disaster do think having a high number closer to the orginal works well

While I’m sure both Albus and Tom are at grade 5 for magic as well they probably reach that level when they were much older than Ivan is now

or Henry the baker

Cannonically the professor Mcgonagal seen in the Fantasic Beast movie is actual Minerva’s aunt as she wasn’t even born yet.

But its not reall war though…

Ok no. (so i sat with the thought for a minute as i do want this to be actual constructive critism) but. This Izuku is not working properly. I think the problem lies in how you are potraying his inteligence as while in the first few chapters it was being shown more subtly you have since fallen into a very expilct “tell dont show” pattern, - Izuku no longer is “analyising, adapting” and all that but is instead is acting “humble” and always “planting seeds” and noting how “interesting” other characters are. Essentially, at least to me, it feels like he is less of an genius minipulator who actually has a chance of changing the world but an edgy teenager who thinks he’s so smart. (Unfortunity there is also the problem of weather or not his choices such as hiding his true power actually help him or not or if the readers themselves can think of a better explanation) Now this isn’t a bad thing. Characters are allowed to be flawed, in fact the best characters are. However there is a very obvious disconnect between how he is wtitten and how he is suppose to seem, case and point being this very sentence; how he cannot wait to get into a real fight and test himself while also pretending to act humble and a shy fanboy. In saying all of this, i love this fic and I’m will 100% keep reading as it is do good, these are just some thoughts i have had

The idea is that his wuirk maybe be able to bypass the villain dampening communications somehow. I headcannon it as Easerhead as not having a proper understanding of the villain’s (or denki’s) quirk and/or just trying out any and all options

And once he is in the air if can use more air pressure punches to stay in the air