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Awespec, I can't find the new incentive structure anywhere. Can you please explain it here or tell me where to find it?

Also, the Moore family?

Your first paragraph lost me. Is George really the flower thief? And remind me, who is William and what crimes has he done?

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Keep the chapters rolling! Let's go team!!!

sSleepy Slime, what's happening bro? This story is awesome, why did it freeze? You have to start writing again!

Great stuff, keep it coming champ! This is honestly one of my favourite stories on here by far. You are doing an awesome job!

Awesome work so far, I'm really enjoying this! Please keep the chapters coming...

Can you stop messing around and properly order the paragraps? I also expect a refund of the last 50 chapters.

or translator, please pay more attention to your work and stop repeating paragraphs and skipping sections. We are all just trying to enjoy

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

This is the poorest sequence of events possible. The way Max says he'll come back for her then never thinks of her again until he finds her body, then his reaction without any feelings whatsoever is just terrible writing. It removes any meaning from the event happening. It's now an empty occurrence like they had eggs for breakfast, but no one cares.

I can understand that, but just think about how hard it would be for someone who lived in a stable society like ours for 50 years to suddenly be thrust into the violence filled cultivation world. Not only that, but would he even survive his tumor and the upheavel on earth for them to ever reveal the truth if he had stayed a normal ignorant mortal. I just want these thoughts to come up when it all comes to light. Not saying they can't overcome it as a family, just that it would be unrealistic if these things were to simply be ignored.