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2019-01-16 đã tham gia Global
Huy hiệu 11

Moments 204
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AbAdDoN
3 months ago
Commented

it should be in pound.

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AbAdDoN
3 months ago
Commented

The author is giving way too much attention to the info dump in every chapter and their day to day life of every character instead of the story progression and even a single breakthrough of mc is taking such a long time so that the author can have everyday's word count get fulfilled... in the end even story now feels subpar as the author don't have any interest in the story except milking money out of it's readers

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AbAdDoN
4 months ago
Commented

yes and sometimes neutral

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AbAdDoN
4 months ago
Replied to ChasingSunMoon

hope so and i am talking about the first part and definitely not the second part. if possible, make him lose his v card along with it as this never losing v card plot has also gone too long.

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AbAdDoN
4 months ago
Commented

Author, i am truly tired waiting for something major to happen to mc. You have unnecessarily made losing his v card hard along with the other useless techniques of the mc requiring way too high resources and even all these techniques doesn't have much use now

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AbAdDoN
4 months ago
Commented

Author, this novel is too good, story, characters, etc are all good but just one complaint that I have is that too much info dump of far future is given in every chapter

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AbAdDoN
5 months ago
Commented

truthfully after all those power ups and hypes and if he truly missed this opportunity to that girl due to this lousy illusion then this is one nasty way to have him nerfed down

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AbAdDoN
5 months ago
Commented

author don't make rely too heavily on his ancestors

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AbAdDoN
5 months ago
Commented

The story pace is too slow and him not telling her that her boyfriend is cheating on her now makes it even more slow

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AbAdDoN
6 months ago
Commented

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