still reading... waiting for more
I am at chapter 39, and so far, I like the concept but do wish the writing was more fluent. it has the feel of direct translation with no polish. so. writer do not give up on this. I look forward to read more.
good chapter but could you please correct the he and she. they break up the read
I thank you for another great chapter
I ask because I started writing a story and need pointers
Thank you for the chapter. I really like your story so far, but I must ask how do you do it?
Thank you for the chapter. I really enjoy your writing. How do you do it thought?
I am sorry that the chapters are to short I aim for 1k words each chapter .
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I thank you for the answer . I did add it but I am not going to go over board in its use. I don't want a stupid or lazy MC so it is there to enhance his body only
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This book as a chance at being good if the Author would pay more attention to names. I feel as if the Author needs and editor to correct some of the Grammer errors. I am only 20 so chapters into the story. I will give it 10 more to improve.
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