Eitan_Davidson

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2019-05-01 đã tham gia Global
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Eitan_Davidson
Eitan_Davidson
8 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Eitan_Davidson
Eitan_Davidson
1 years ago
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guy was great teacher there Is a whole filler episode about him training tenten and helping her figure out what suits her first she medic stuff iy doesn't work eventually they find she is good at fuinjutsu and space time ninjutsu.

Fujin groaned a bit at his schedule. He thought, 'No freaking way! Since when did Jounin sensei begin spending so much time to train their genins? Heck, apart from Kakashi teaching Sasuke Chidori, and Guy teaching Lee, I don't think any of the remaining 10 were taught anything significant at all by their sensei! With him practically taking my whole day, I won't have any time to keep practicing Fuinjutsu or learn any new Ninjutsu! I am not sure if the trade off is worth it.'

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

Eitan_Davidson
Eitan_Davidson
3 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Eitan_Davidson
Eitan_Davidson
3 years ago
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don't fold to haters. it's ur novel write how u want it.

Eitan_Davidson
Eitan_Davidson
3 years ago
Posted

i am really enjoying this fanfic. definitely in my top 3 HP fanfics.I like the MC isn't insanely op that instead he faces set backs and has to work hard to improve. this makes milestones in the novel feel earned. furthermore I appreciate the cautious but still kind nature of the mc. the characters feel like real people and we slowly gain a better understanding of them which is great. though I do feel the mc's sister is a little overlooked and underdeveloped. I know this book is supposed to be break for the author because of burnout but I really hope more focus can be put on it because so far it's fantastic. my only criticism would be for more updates and a consistent release schedule.

Eitan_Davidson
Eitan_Davidson
4 years ago
Commented

2 chaps a day is the bomb

Eitan_Davidson
Eitan_Davidson
4 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon