Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my stories so much. As for the descriptions, I was mostly worried about whether I made mistakes and such. I reread it, and while it's vague and a bit short, I feel it can work as an initial/general description.
The last kick had conveyed a superior power level. It wasn't even comparable to Khan's previous attacks. The latter had merely relied on his speed, specific techniques, and physical prowess, but the former wielded something more profound.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
I mean, different situations allow different descriptions. This was only the first one anyway. It's more of an appetizer to give the general idea.
The last kick had conveyed a superior power level. It wasn't even comparable to Khan's previous attacks. The latter had merely relied on his speed, specific techniques, and physical prowess, but the former wielded something more profound.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
I'll reread and see whether some descriptions can be improved. Anyway, this won't be the only one.
The last kick had conveyed a superior power level. It wasn't even comparable to Khan's previous attacks. The latter had merely relied on his speed, specific techniques, and physical prowess, but the former wielded something more profound.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
I changed it a bit.
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Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
I don't give spoilers.
The "his" refers to Bruno's arrival.
Prince Khan had tried to hide it, but Bruno wasn't easily tricked. Bruno knew the Prince had achieved some breakthroughs since his arrival to Baoway. The young Prince's steps alone confirmed that. Many would ignore that small detail, but Bruno saw a hidden world behind it.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
I'm told they'll bring back the function soon.
I can ask, but I'm not sure I can do much about it.
See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
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original Chaos' Heir
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A recurring nightmare afflicted Khan's nights since the Second Impact. His dreams replayed the scenes of the crash of the Nak's spaceship, an alien race that the humans had defeated five hundred years ago. Khan's life had turned upside-down after the tragedy. His mother had died during the incident, and the Nak's toxic mana had infected him. His father had managed to save him, but they ended up losing their home and name in the process. The nightmares wouldn't let Khan forget about the Nak, so he decided to join the Global Army and learn to wield mana. He had to put an end to those dreams, even if that meant hunting down that alien race through the stars. ------------------------------------- Follow me on Twitter: https://twitter.com/EoCNovels Instagram: eocnovels Discord link: https://discord.gg/fNsPwXMP7P Cover artist: https://digitalrowye.com/967 Chs 40.6k sưu tầm
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Birth of the Demonic Sword
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"So, that's how my life ends, what a waste of time it was...". These were the last thoughts of a young man, shot by accident in a fight between local gangs. Little did he know that he would soon wake up in another world, a world of cultivation! This is the story of the whoreson of a wealthy family, of a transmigrator that had no purpose in his previous life, of a demon that will make power his reason to keep on living. Noah Balvan, after he transmigrated, will have to fight against his social status and the many difficulties of the world he was reborn in to obtain the power to stand free in the sky above anyone! Follow me on twitter: https://twitter.com/EoCNovels Instagram: eocnovels Discord link: https://discord.gg/CNh28NP Cover artist: https://digitalrowye.com/ Fandom: https://botds.fandom.com/wiki/Birth_of_the_Demonic_Sword_Wiki2364 Chs 1.9m sưu tầm
I wrote that he stomped toward the incoming attack. Ugh, sure, arrowhead can work. It's just that the world sort of collapses at its passage.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos