It wouldn't have made sense due to power scaling. The evolution wouldn't have been much otherwise, and Khan could defeat fifth-level warriors years ago.
I'll change it to something less specific.
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Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
No. I'm Italian.
"Come to mummy, little one, you did a wonderful job today. Mum is happy!"
Birth of the Demonic Sword
Eastern · Eveofchaos
I've been very inconsistent. You guys are just too good to me.
It's me who sucked in past months/year.
I mean, it mostly was a matter of physical strength with Monica now.
I wrote that he stomped toward the incoming attack. Ugh, sure, arrowhead can work. It's just that the world sort of collapses at its passage.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my stories so much. As for the descriptions, I was mostly worried about whether I made mistakes and such. I reread it, and while it's vague and a bit short, I feel it can work as an initial/general description.
The last kick had conveyed a superior power level. It wasn't even comparable to Khan's previous attacks. The latter had merely relied on his speed, specific techniques, and physical prowess, but the former wielded something more profound.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
I mean, different situations allow different descriptions. This was only the first one anyway. It's more of an appetizer to give the general idea.
The last kick had conveyed a superior power level. It wasn't even comparable to Khan's previous attacks. The latter had merely relied on his speed, specific techniques, and physical prowess, but the former wielded something more profound.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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A recurring nightmare afflicted Khan's nights since the Second Impact. His dreams replayed the scenes of the crash of the Nak's spaceship, an alien race that the humans had defeated five hundred years ago. Khan's life had turned upside-down after the tragedy. His mother had died during the incident, and the Nak's toxic mana had infected him. His father had managed to save him, but they ended up losing their home and name in the process. The nightmares wouldn't let Khan forget about the Nak, so he decided to join the Global Army and learn to wield mana. He had to put an end to those dreams, even if that meant hunting down that alien race through the stars. ------------------------------------- Follow me on Twitter: https://twitter.com/EoCNovels Instagram: eocnovels Discord link: https://discord.gg/fNsPwXMP7P Cover artist: https://digitalrowye.com/990 Chs 40.6k sưu tầm
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Birth of the Demonic Sword
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"So, that's how my life ends, what a waste of time it was...". These were the last thoughts of a young man, shot by accident in a fight between local gangs. Little did he know that he would soon wake up in another world, a world of cultivation! This is the story of the whoreson of a wealthy family, of a transmigrator that had no purpose in his previous life, of a demon that will make power his reason to keep on living. Noah Balvan, after he transmigrated, will have to fight against his social status and the many difficulties of the world he was reborn in to obtain the power to stand free in the sky above anyone! Follow me on twitter: https://twitter.com/EoCNovels Instagram: eocnovels Discord link: https://discord.gg/CNh28NP Cover artist: https://digitalrowye.com/ Fandom: https://botds.fandom.com/wiki/Birth_of_the_Demonic_Sword_Wiki2364 Chs 1.9m sưu tầm
Don't worry, I understand your point. I actually wanted to make the fight more heated, but it just wouldn't have made sense. If anything, the fact that Khan used his knife should tell you that the General was no weakling.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos