Hey autor, your story is good until mc on school. The way u show a bully too mentally tiring for reading that, too fool, too naive and she is who girl mc fall in love mc fall in love suddenly? She is beautiful? Cute? Sexy? Is up to u now author, we sure be better, too tired read character naive and idiot
Until now i feel, the Roan like the true mc, rean is the side character LOL More dominan roan, author too many focus on roan
Death... and me
Fantasy · Suiyan