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First thank you I have really enjoyed the story up to this point. i Think the way xing reacted us very normal for him just look at how he reacted with Zuko. but he needs to be alot colder to Azula as well as all of the 11th regiment will react very angrily.Now saying that I am extremely disappointed that you went the soft cuck route for harem. in my opinion it is poor writing and from the last 100 chapters you have been alot better.this is your book and thanks for letting us read it and follow along the ride. but I will say the only way I can see this working at this point is too xing will need his own breakdown but maybe with Ren Kai and ping who see him as a younger brother. and then it will need for time to pass and maybe a significant event maybe Azula almost dying or visit with the avatar. I am not sure but this can't be forgotten or forgiven quickly. I also think you need to use this to make xing accept and show more his emotions and not make him such a perfect robot that he seems at times.still I am too invested in the story to stop reading but it does leave a poor taste in the mouth i hope you can resolve this better.

thanks for the chapter

i am #teamhaley if it's in universe character love interest but wouldn't mind Taylor.... please not Alex... i think she can have a couple chapters where they try it out but then they decide not to. I see them as friends or brother/sister relationship