Excellent. The excruciating events of the sidestory has given way to the Main story(which is the important part of this novel) May this story never wander off again from what makes this novel alive. Thank you. Hopefully we can now stick to the storyline.... Peace to all.
ch 647 The Fallen
Sci-fi · Neobear
Yap, totally agree with you here... The storyline has wandered to other "no - essentials".. This chapter could have been described in a single paragraph.. IMHO
ch 646 Face Off
Sci-fi · Neobear
Nice chapter but the train of the story seems to be going nowhere by shifting the scenes on side topics when our concern is still with the UN and the rescue of the prince's. This is just a side note on the main story line in my opinion... No matter how well written in its details and such...
ch 645 Mud and Blood
Sci-fi · Neobear
Not really into that girl-girl thing... MC- girl(s) is the right formula... Just saying.
ch 307 The Goddess Of Lust [Part 1]
Fantasy · Elyon
The author does not seem to know how to humanize the character of the MC. . He may as well be a Golem or a robot...
ch 42 That’s Not Lightning; It’s a Human!
Fantasy · Abundance Every Year
A bit too asinine... Analysing and soul searching during a fight? Unrealistically juvenile.... Not so very riveting nor attention devoting in any way.... Sorry! Just mho...
ch 17 You Were Killed in Just Three Moves
Fantasy · Abundance Every Year
Good chapter... Thanks again... Maybe there'll be a possible 3 some with the Slavia Colonel?
ch 165 Moment to relax (smut +18)
Eastern · MotivatedSloth
6 chapters released but is not available, how come?
ch 364 Checking In
Fantasy · TimVic
I see. Wish you the best of good recovery and health. This is a very good novel... Please keep it up.
ch 631 A Favour
Sci-fi · Neobear
This is actually 2 unrelated books. At chapter 328, it becomes a totally unrelated story... This si NOT RECOMMENDED
ch 0 3 Body-carrying Carriage
Fantasy · Soy Sauce San
Get well soon. Getting Covid19 with no complications is just like getting the "Flu"... You'll get well soon.
ch 336 267. Plato and Endo's meeting.
Sci-fi · autistic25
Thank u 4 this chapter.. Can't wait for more...
ch 333 264. Reactions from various parties.
Sci-fi · autistic25
Very good chapter. Thank you. Take good care and do stay safe and care for your health. God bless.
ch 331 262. Conclusion of the signing ceremony Part 1.
Sci-fi · autistic25
To author Authistic25, this novel of yours I consider so far to be as great as that by Er Mu's "Release that witch" which is a classic. Hopefully you will not suffer the same fate of being forced to end the novel prematurely and leaving a lot of loose ends to a superb storyline such as this. Again, CONGRATULATIONS and Much gratitude for this novel so far. Hope the romance aspect will not be downplayed.... as it has been so far.
ch 330 261. City of Lights.
Sci-fi · autistic25
Wow! As in... WOW!!! Much gratitude for those chapters. Hopefully you can sustain such kind of mass release... My giving power stones despite no chapters have been worth it. Thank you. Again, I say... This has the makings of one of the greatest novels here... Kudos to you Author... 👏👏👏
ch 330 261. City of Lights.
Sci-fi · autistic25
To be honest, this has a very good storyline, but releasing chapters in bits and pieces over a prolonged period of time makes a very good novel a specially lousy one.... It seems the author just has no interest or care in his writing the novel... Or he may be sick and possibly on the verge of death and still tries to produce something towards the conclusion of this novel... Anyway, whatever the reasons, I advise of just pulling out and canceling your novel if you can only produce 1 chapter a month...that makes this good novel entirely useless... Thank you.
ch 423 The champion of the north-part four-
The supreme sovereign system
War · phamtonbullet