Mortedor

"I don't know what you mean; all fanfics have something similar. Overall, I see the work is headed in the right direction; nothing is perfect. Asking for a massive update without any incentive is selfish. It seems the author is just publishing because it's a hobby, like it is for all readers. You need to let them write at their own pace. It's because of these selfish comments that many authors get discouraged and leave their works, which have a lot of potential