Frankly I don't love the idea of MC's relationship only with Endorsi. She's nice, but I feel that Hwa Ryun, Yuri and Maschenny are much better(Well, in terms of design and charisma) But I understand that creating a romantic relationship with them is not very realistic. Although I think with Yuri it's definitely possible, not because Baam didn't dare means MC can't. And as for Hwa Ryun, him being an irregular should open a couple of doors with her.
Maybe this is just me, but I feel like the fight scenes are terribly bad. The mc's fighting style is terribly simple and uncreative. Of all the versions of gravity magic I've read, yours is without a doubt the worst. I'd like to believe it's because you're still many years away from mastering such complicated magic. But I'm pretty sure I read that MC had already mastered it.
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Why is it that every time I read a stupid comment, it's yours?
I would still have another training session and shower later in the day, and did not want to bother Lilia with excessive laundry, so I put on the same underwear and only changed my clothes into something clean to wear around the house for the time being.
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This story is too good for web novel, you should start publishing elsewhere. I hate to say this, but maybe you should open a patreon. Just so you don't lose the motivation to write. It would be heartbreaking if you abandon this masterpiece. All in all, the best Mushoku tensei fanfic.
As a reader, I greatly appreciate the work you do to research the MT canon and then explain it to us. All your comments are really worth reading. But about Orsted, really his mana capacity is so “low”? Isn't it about Orsted's mana level when he first appears? Orsted was not at his full capacity at that time. I always imagined that his mana would be higher than Rudeus', at least.
An Advanced rank swordsman that can run at around 50 km/h sustainable top speed, which is Paul who said he can match a galloping horse, obviously can't react to that; that's only twice the speed of an athletic ordinary human.
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Anime & Comics · Jaed21
I'm sure I've read that Rudeus has more mana than Laplace, but I don't recall reading that he has twice as much as Laplace.
An Advanced rank swordsman that can run at around 50 km/h sustainable top speed, which is Paul who said he can match a galloping horse, obviously can't react to that; that's only twice the speed of an athletic ordinary human.
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It's boring for you, but if the author likes it, let him write his story. Besides, I liked it, the spell and its limitations, it is very well explained. On the other hand, it also leaves a precedent in his ability to create spells.
While reading this I could only imagine the faces of Paul's haters xD. Honestly, Paul sucks, but he's one of the best characters in Mushoku tensei. I think a lot of the hate towards him is unjustified. I'm glad to see there's a relatively neutral author with him. By the way, there's something you forgot, you didn't mention what Seraph, Eric and Silphy's progress was in these two years.
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Anime & Comics · Jaed21