imeldaflavia

female LV 14

a night owl / bookworm

2018-11-15 đã tham gia Indonesia
Huy hiệu 9

Moments 13
imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
1 months ago
Replied to zeptaras

I think someone swap their soul with jingwei and then they stole qingqing luck.

imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
2 months ago
Posted

it's not finished. very bad ending. don't read it.

imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
4 months ago
Commented

i hate the way her mother dismissed her in front of Minister Su.

imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
1 years ago
Commented

it's so easy to coax her 😂

imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
1 years ago
Commented

oh my.... surviving an apocalypse and getting the man. you go girl!!!

imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
1 years ago
Commented

4 '!' in this paragraf

Just as how Jiang Tong had understood Old Ghost, if one wanted to talk to Old Ghost, they had to beat him. He was very persistent with the knife. Those who could defeat him with a knife would become a special existence in his heart. Just from the perspective of cold weapon combat, Old Ghost would think that the other party was powerful and invincible! This was the mentality that an extremely confident person would have after being defeated! He would think that if he couldn't win, who else could? And Jiang Tong had not only defeated him, but seven people, including him! They fought together!

I Repeated The Same Day For 500 Years

I Repeated The Same Day For 500 Years

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imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
1 years ago
Commented

in this paragraf alone, I found 5 sentences end with '!'. you overused it

The silent Old Ghost didn't touch the gun. Jiang Tong's words were very clear. Although he was suspicious, he believed that he had a chance to kill Jiang Tong directly. However, he did not understand. He did not immediately realize that this was an instinctive fear of Jiang Tong! The car accident plan to deal with Jiang Tong had been a sudden decision, but it had failed! Everyone had been captured! In the elevator, the seven of them attempted to kill her, but Jiang Tong won. After escaping from the hospital for more than an hour, Jiang Tong appeared as soon as he reached the safe house. Jiang Tong even dared to give him a gun! Old Ghost was very confident in his ability to fight in close combat. He was indeed confident in his ability, but Jiang Tong had overturned his understanding. From that moment on, his understanding of Jiang Tong had been raised to an unimaginable level! And he was very impressed!

I Repeated The Same Day For 500 Years

I Repeated The Same Day For 500 Years

General · Cow Cow Cow

imeldaflavia
imeldaflavia
1 years ago
Commented

well I just notice the pattern. why do you always need to end the sentences with "!" occasionally use is ok, but overused will make reader irritated. why can't you use simple ending such as "." why always use "!" ?