Werring

male LV 14

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2018-11-15 đã tham gia Netherlands
Huy hiệu 12

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Werring
Werring
2 years ago
Posted

While the premise of the story is interesting and sometimes quite humorous, I had to drop it. The grammar is just abhorrent. Having English as a second language, doesn't prevent you from using a spelling & grammar checker (ms word, open office, Google docs)

Werring
Werring
2 years ago
Commented

while a lot of people "complain" about this being illogical, keep in mind that this is the reasoning of a 13 year old (without much parental guidance). So you shouldn't expect perfect reasoning from him.

Thinking about his cured eyes was delightful but on the downside, Jason couldn't read. Once everyone including his teachers would know that his vision had magically returned and that he could now see perfectly well, he would have to sit for a normal written exam like every other student. He wouldn't be granted the AI's assistance anymore that was normally given to children with special needs. Without the AI, he wouldn't know what was written on the holographic screen.

God´s Eyes

God´s Eyes

Urban · HideousGrain

Werring
Werring
2 years ago
Replied to SIRI_NOVA10121999

ETA is the abbreviation of Estimated Time of Arrival

Werring
Werring
2 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Werring
Werring
2 years ago
Commented

A new release! thanks!

Werring
Werring
3 years ago
Commented

don't think this is translated well. he hasn't been killed.

Now that Lin Ming was killed, wouldn't the divine artefact belong to them?

Mage Academy: I Have Infinite Skill Points

Mage Academy: I Have Infinite Skill Points

Fantasy · Half-Fated Sir