You are missing the main point here. Although this first book will be ASOIAF fanfic, the story would concentrate on the kingdom building. I wanted to go original at first but I will need more time to draw such a well-defined world like ASOIAF. So I decided to use existing words first to show my idea before going original.
Bro, I said it would take time to build the progress of this book. I even said in the description that those who does not like that, please stop reading it. I even explained in my other comments that the story would start very slow since I want to build everything correctly. I could have started the action from the first chapter but then the other characters would die with that. I finished the introduction about the system in this chapter. The MC will start searching about his identity and receive his fist mission in three chapters. That is all I can say.
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Just at the start. After some development the story would fly fast.
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I swear to god that I said at the start that It would start slowly. After I am finished with the relationship between the characters, it would move very fast then.
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The other characters will probably start appearing from the next chapter. I know that it took long but the relationship between the host and the system must be determined this early on.
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I will change it then.
Nope, he can't. The system is designed to make him build his own kingdom from scratch. Plus, even if he thought of buying it just imagine how many points something like that would cost.
I know this fact bro. That is why I said at the start that this story would start slowly since I wanted to set the right development of the main character. The system is the MC's main companion and the relationship between the two needed some time to develop. As for the other characters, although some would still have some bit of relationship between them and the host, it would not be as close as his relationship with the system.
Yeah, Exactly. It would have a radar to alarm the host if any enemy is attacking. At a much higher lever, the system could read the situation of the surrounding kingdoms and give some hints to the host. I wanted to develop the system as if it was a normal character in the book. I could not just make the system too smart and too powerful. If it helped the host in every small matter then where is the challenge??
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This is a story where a soul that died for millions of years got a system and travelled to game of thrones world. Many things would happen in their journey together. Follow up that soul as it went through hardships one after another until the kingdom is built. ----------------------------------------------- Hello, everyone!!!! Author is here!!!! - I don't own the story or most of the characters. - Cover is not mine. - It is my first time writing so please help me during this journey together. - I edit the chapters before uploading them but there would be mistakes here and there. Once you pointed me to the error, I would change it at once, even if it required me to stop the story for some time to change it. - I already had a job but I could not earn enough. That is why I decided to follow my passion and write as a part-time job for now. - My work will always be free with three chapters a week on this site and five on my patre`on. - The chapter's length is between 1k-1.3k words as I find it hard to write this story because of the system. - The story would move slowly, especially at the first part. If you hate such a thing, don't continue with the reading. - Please write a well-illustrated review so that I could know what is missing. -If you wanted to support me: https://www.patreon.com/GamersForLife8 Chs 446 sưu tầm
Ok, thanks for your comment. I decided to change the length of the chapters from 1k-1-3k words to 1.8k-2k words. By tomorrow morning, you will find out that we only had six chapters here. But I will only upload three chapters a week like this.
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