defnavy

defnavy

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2018-10-26 đã tham gia United States
Huy hiệu 23

Moments 30
defnavy
defnavy
1 months ago
Replied to Gorgonzola_Willywa

congratulations on your superior reading skills. I will wait for your next response so I don't have to continue reading any further.

Yes, a newly initiated disciple of the Kunlun Sect, Direct Disciple of the Sect Leader, Qiu Changtian.

Starting My Cultivation With Time Management

Starting My Cultivation With Time Management

Games · Ghostly Blessing

defnavy
defnavy
1 months ago
Replied to Gorgonzola_Willywa

Thanks for the spoiler, and congratulations on your literary skills.

Yes, a newly initiated disciple of the Kunlun Sect, Direct Disciple of the Sect Leader, Qiu Changtian.

Starting My Cultivation With Time Management

Starting My Cultivation With Time Management

Games · Ghostly Blessing

defnavy
defnavy
1 months ago
Replied to Gorgonzola_Willywa

good you can read ahead. I haven't read chapter 2 yet but it will still be the same due to his status no matter what he would still have seniority due to his master.

Yes, a newly initiated disciple of the Kunlun Sect, Direct Disciple of the Sect Leader, Qiu Changtian.

Starting My Cultivation With Time Management

Starting My Cultivation With Time Management

Games · Ghostly Blessing

defnavy
defnavy
1 months ago
Replied to Gorgonzola_Willywa

he has seniority due to his master being the sect master.

Yes, a newly initiated disciple of the Kunlun Sect, Direct Disciple of the Sect Leader, Qiu Changtian.

Starting My Cultivation With Time Management

Starting My Cultivation With Time Management

Games · Ghostly Blessing

defnavy
defnavy
1 months ago
Commented

editing needs a lot of work. the story would be even better if more was put into the editing.

defnavy
defnavy
2 months ago
Commented

chapter 314 for those interested in verifying.

In Olaynore, each of the three floors had a Guardian, and they were responsible for keeping order and the Founders' wishes to exclude the Wizard Tower safe. In the end, the Founders knew that their own children would one day wish to get out of that birdcage, and the Elder, who was the reason the Founders' Book existed, believed it was a key to getting out of the cage. However, the Guardian of the Forest of the Lost revealed that he had long ago used the Book of the Founders to resurrect a human woman he loved.

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Games · NandoFalske

defnavy
defnavy
2 months ago
Commented

it was the guardian of the citadel. I guess the only consistency is the inconsistency with the editing.

In Olaynore, each of the three floors had a Guardian, and they were responsible for keeping order and the Founders' wishes to exclude the Wizard Tower safe. In the end, the Founders knew that their own children would one day wish to get out of that birdcage, and the Elder, who was the reason the Founders' Book existed, believed it was a key to getting out of the cage. However, the Guardian of the Forest of the Lost revealed that he had long ago used the Book of the Founders to resurrect a human woman he loved.

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Games · NandoFalske

defnavy
defnavy
2 months ago
Commented

you should keep notes it wasn't the guardian of the forest who used the book.

In Olaynore, each of the three floors had a Guardian, and they were responsible for keeping order and the Founders' wishes to exclude the Wizard Tower safe. In the end, the Founders knew that their own children would one day wish to get out of that birdcage, and the Elder, who was the reason the Founders' Book existed, believed it was a key to getting out of the cage. However, the Guardian of the Forest of the Lost revealed that he had long ago used the Book of the Founders to resurrect a human woman he loved.

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Games · NandoFalske

defnavy
defnavy
2 months ago
Commented

can the editor please get this right it is quite annoying. Jayaa is supposed to be a guy and not a girl.

Jayaa remained silent, frightened, observing her surroundings with sharp eyes and attentive ears. Her intuition told her that there was still something deeply disturbing about this place.

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Games · NandoFalske

defnavy
defnavy
2 months ago
Commented

It would be nice to see the name of the store remain the same instead of changing every paragraph.

Kaizen returned the hug with equal enthusiasm and despite the situation of his store, he smiled. "Yes, I'm back! I've missed you and the Crow Feather so much!"

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

Games · NandoFalske