Drake_Dresden

1 months ago

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minor story spoilers included read at own risk. later, half of the story had many grammar issues and genders mixed up. also, many side characters have general based personalities and don't really contribute to the story, which is only really used for more chapters and word count. ending was absolutely terrible and extremely abrupt. Mc also has basically 2 romance interests who basically become background information, same with his sister. also, there's like 3 chapters involving his mother, and that's at the end of the book. overall, only the first half of the story is good.

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Sci-fi · Black Eyes White Hair

Drake_Dresden

1 months ago

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wish this name was different conflicts with Wang tens space god slayer scripture

God Slayer First Stance*3000

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Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu

Drake_Dresden

1 months ago

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we keep seeing the real eye fail, but mc still doesn't improve it. has he become the cliche moron mc archetype?

"I didn't see it clearly," Wang Teng shook his head. He felt a growing sense of unease because even with his Real Eye, he couldn't discern where that shadow might be hiding.

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Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu

Drake_Dresden

1 months ago

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her and his are being messed up alot. why has the quality dropped?

"It seems to be a peculiar natural disaster from Scorpion King Star, somewhat similar to the earlier vortex of air currents," Round Ball immediately responded, her voice grave. "But this poison tide seems to be even more horrifying."

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Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu

Drake_Dresden

1 months ago

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is it immortal or divine choose one you f**king moron!!

Of course, it wasn't easy to raise his water talent to the immortal level either.

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Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu

Drake_Dresden

1 months ago

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it feels like the edit quality has dropped alot

Wang Teng felt the intense toxicity within it, and his expression changed slightly. He quickly channeled the constellation Wang Teng within his body and thrust his palm forward.