Hocolate

Hocolate

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2018-09-10 ฤ‘รฃ tham gia Indonesia
Huy hiแป‡u 4

Moments 17
Hocolate
Hocolate
27 days ago
Replied to Artemisix_01

I agree with this person, at least he still has some sense, you know these LGBTQ +++ ABCDEFGZ groups have kidnapped children in a moral way in both places and times in westerns. Be it at school or even at home they are shameless and ridiculous the law protects them.

Hocolate
Hocolate
27 days ago
Posted

I haven't read this novel and even jumped straight to the final chapter 85 now, but after seeing several reviews about Bell who said he was a woman or something (Cross-dressing or bender bender), I don't know if that's true or not. I just said no LGBTQ ++ ABCDEFGZ You know western games are ruined because of them, starting from Concord, Star Wars Outlaw, even Assassin's Creed Shadows which is said to smell disgusting too. So whether the author is actually a group of those in disguise, I don't care, especially the LGBTQ+++ ABCDFGZ predators who hunt children on social media and even invite them (kidnapping to brainwash). Wherever we are and whoever it is, if it smells of LGBTQ++ABCDEFGZ, we are obliged to rate one review. It's already disturbing because they are hunting children. Stay safe

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Hocolate
Hocolate
1 months ago
Posted

Don't ever try to read this novel, there are many better novels, because the author is such a simp that even he is too narrow to develop his own characters, by killing and killing. Even though in reality, if he tried to point and shoot a gun at the police station. I guarantee the author's head will definitely have a hole in it. I know this is just a novel, but without balance the reality becomes very ugly, that's why I'm slowly leaving the author simp. Lastly and advice, don't ever donate or support with your dollars, or you will also be an idiot. Why ? If you have a mind and use your brain, you will definitely realize what I mean. real examples of the games Concord and Star Wars Outlaw, are the most failed games in AAA gaming history. keep smart and safe!!!

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Hocolate
Hocolate
1 months ago
Replied to BlackFox_Memorys

Yes, I agree

Hocolate
Hocolate
6 months ago
Posted

Believe it or not, this novel will be dropped by the author himself. I haven't even read it but I'm not kidding with my assessment. Alpha readers are the first readers after the novel manuscript has finished its final chapter. The alpha reader can be yourself as a writer or someone else.

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Hocolate
Hocolate
6 months ago
Posted

Sampah ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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Hocolate
Hocolate
6 months ago
Replied to Supernova_Uchiha

do you even have a brain?!โ€ giving a 5 star review on a novel that can't even be called a novel?

Hocolate
Hocolate
6 months ago
Posted

I'm even sure that this author can't play a game, be it offline (BaldurGate 3 bannerlord, harvest moon etc.) or online (ESO, BDO etc.). Why ? because he wrote a story script where MC OP (an idiot brain with an IQ of 10) with his stupid system. He doesn't understand what expectations and reality are (with summoning Budha, Scathach, Ruhas, Killua? lol) I'm even sure that in the reality of an author like you, if you play and create a team in Dota 2, maybe in the initial preliminary round of The International you will have 300 dead on your hero hahahahahahahahahhahahaahhahaha

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Hocolate
Hocolate
6 months ago
Posted

Will the author continue the story? If this drops, I'd like to pick up this fanfic ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Hocolate
Hocolate
1 years ago
Posted

the weirdest useless novel ever, I don't know why webnovels become a means of incompetent writers like this? trash author who probably didn't go to school. Maybe you're not even the author worth mentioning, but the clown who feels the coolest is like the joker.

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