PatriarchReader

PatriarchReader

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2019-06-03 đã tham gia Global
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PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
Posted

A big disappointment for a novel. It starts well, but soon the author starts to contradict himself, complains about the heroes who never kill the villains and arrest them so they can run away and kill/rape again. But when the main character has a chance to make a difference he does the same thing, at first when he was weak he gave the excuse of not wanting to be chased by batman, but when he gets strong he starts coming up with a bunch of lame excuses. Even when he has a bounty on his head and every bandit and mercenary comes after his life, he decides to 'send a message' that no one should do this to him, so what does he do? he beats them and arrests them, so they can go out and continue killing/raping in 1 week when they escape from prison. The author himself demonstrates this when the person who placed the bounty regains consciousness the first thing he says is "Now listen here, you—". Doesn't look like the foolproof plan to beat up the bad guys worked to 'send a message', does it? It makes no sense how anyone wastes time writing or reading this after realizing it. It's just another fanfic with a character that doesn't add anything to the original DC story. He has no desires, he doesn't have a goal he wants to fulfill in the world, he simply exists as a throwaway character, why the hell should I care about this character when he doesn't do anything or wants anything, I should read on just to see him increase his stats for doing nothing and see how strong he gets? 1 star for wasting time reading until the part where the author says how useless the character would be.

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PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
Commented

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"They have adopted even faster. We have discovered that they are quite talented in the Aura Master department compared to humans–focusing more on speed and dexterity. However, their magical talent is subpar compared to humans."

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Book&Literature · LazySageDao

PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
Commented

hey author, for this sentence to make sense "release something that could shake the history of Hollywood" he should have made Breaking Bad, Game of Thrones or The Office, they are series that even those who have never seen them know how good they are ( I myself have never seen Game of Thrones but I know the whole story just from so many posts that so many people made on the internet). I even hope to read about them in the future even if you do like that other fanfic that the mc started putting other people to direct his films. PS. your story is better than his, loving it so far

Thinking about the response which was somewhat late from Eloise, Ian sat near his computer and started continuing the next script he has been working on. It was a series called, "Lucifer". He was going to create a series because he wanted to get it into OTT (over the top) platforms and the series market. Since those types of things were much more popular these days, he wanted to release something that could shake the history of Hollywood.

Hollywood King

Hollywood King

Movies · TC_Liyanage1

PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
Commented

Will he find this guy?

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For the most part, he was curious about what kind of a person Ryan Gosling might be. And then, he kept thinking about the other actors and ideas for his next big projects.

Hollywood King

Hollywood King

Movies · TC_Liyanage1

PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
Commented

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Elly thus quickly made her way to the top of the main mast, hanging the flag and causing us all to cheer. "Now we only need to receive our payment from that yellow turd, beat the crap out of him, and do one last thing on Kano country before making our way to reverse mountain," I exclaimed while watching my Jolly Roger flap in the air with a smirk.

One Piece: The legend of Johnny Silverhand (dropped)

One Piece: The legend of Johnny Silverhand (dropped)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
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The increase in mana in the environment has granted some individuals special powers or gifts. Based on the data gathered, these abilities varied from elemental control, teleportation, and many other magical abilities.

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Book&Literature · LazySageDao

PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
Replied to Some_Time_Later

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PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
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But he never thought that the latter was hiding deep under the sea. This was an oversight on his part. Truth be told, it was not totally his fault; it was mainly because he was scarred from the first time he tried to explore the deep sea.

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Book&Literature · LazySageDao

PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
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you all can look forward for tomorrow. I have prepared a little gift for you.

Pokemon: Master of tactics

Pokemon: Master of tactics

Anime & Comics · alex02373

PatriarchReader
PatriarchReader
2 years ago
Commented

so you're back, it's not like i miss you or anything

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