Huy hiệu 18
Moments 9
awg422
Bro the writing on this chapter I love twists in time like this!!! Exceptional and exemplary! I love it
awg422
Why does he never mention Nate he was such a big roll in the beginnning!
awg422
He is doing the marriage thing right now so probably on a honeymoon
awg422
No problem I am enjoying the story so far though it’s got good potential and a nice storyline
awg422
*punched
awg422
Not a bad story just needs to be written with more past tense so it reads smoother. Ex: he runs and punches the hand….he ran and punches the hand. Sounds better
awg422
Well thank you for your time and good fortune to you!
awg422
Hey I’ve Enjoyed your stories but had to ask have you dropped A story of Evil
Not much to say other then this is a great story especially if your into system and nana based systems. It also throws in some other power concepts to really amp the story later on. It also helps that the chapter release is good. It’s nice not to have to wait for them
Bro, I'm not an Undead!
Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun