While I do think purpose is important, half of this chapter at most of the previous chapter have been repeating the same things: Sabrina and Melvin’s family
Both were determined to give their all to protect and heal Sabrina, even if that meant they had to exceed their limits and enter dangerous fields.
Odyssey of the Blind God
Fantasy · HideousGrain
This is like saying: he is rich due to his money. Maybe mentioning the business procured from academies or some specialization may be more fitting.
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Celestial Bloodline
Fantasy · _Orange_
He lacked points
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Celestial Bloodline
Fantasy · _Orange_
Is this a pun? 👀
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Fantasy · _Orange_
After gold coins, “mana stones” are…
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Fantasy · _Orange_
I would use dashes here. -well you will fail anyway-…
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Fantasy · _Orange_
This guy gotta chill out, when growing up gender is not a focus. Love the realist racism displayed by the way (strong emphasis on “realistic”)
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Summoner: Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Duke_Asmodeus
Not me reading this at 1am 💀
Meal after meal of takeout led to gastritis and fatty liver, while irregular sleep patterns and overtime work resulted in cervical spondylosis, arrhythmia, and tendinitis for him.
Cultivating From Obtaining Experience
Urban · Boiled Turbot