The writing is flowing much better should also make conversation and story connections seem more natural really liking it much better can’t wait to see the rest updated as well as the continuing story hopefully won’t take too long
As well as My wife slaps people in the face online daily
Chapter 81 of My wife slaps people in the face online daily almost word for word
This is just like chapter 51 of Ma’am you’ ve been Uncovered
The other one is Ma’am You’ve been uncovered
Have him start up a new sport instead a wizard version of pod racing
Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape(HP, Star Wars)(In process of being rewrite!)
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