This story is simply a children's tale about friendship, with a childlike drama that seems completely silly to an adult. Therefore, if you are over 18, I am not sure you will find it interesting to read. The story is suitable for its target audience, but others may want to pass on it.
Perhaps you should start writing interesting stories with a smart and strong main character? Instead of what you usually write? It's not surprising that your novels aren't read and you have no money.
she fed on the sperm of other men.
the main character is really backward, instead of having sex with the succubus again, he begins to train in skills. the main character is really backward, instead of having sex with the succubus again, he begins to train in skills.
I still don't understand why he ran away when he could have killed them all? Is he an idiot?
The small brain of the author will not be able to cope with this plot. He is better off writing an ordinary harem.
Only my grandchildren will see the end of this story if the author finishes it.
the author does not know how to further develop the plot. it was supposed to be a story about a harem. now it's just a story about a deceitful protagonist who deceives women.
Retard
Great advice, should I read 100 chapters I don't like so that everything gets better in the end? Brilliant
My Beautiful Disciples, I'm really not the Main Character!
Fantasy · Revonne