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It felt like I was reading a very long summation. Powers and the system has many errors and plot holes.. for example "Ban's healing" because from what I'm aware of Ban from 7DS power is Immortality, no healing. Then lets say MC has bans healing power, but why hes afraid to go beyond 20% of OFA power?.

boring shallow character design #.................... ................ .............. . ..................... .......... .......................

grammar and writing quality was good but i felt some of the plot was forcefully trying to change.. ..........................................

Writing quality and world background is kinda good and mediocre. story development is kinda lacking of what I expected to a slice of life. all about simpin' ladies and their 'colourful attributes' depicted to almost each chapters(iloveharemtho). Keep it up author!👍

my brains cells.. ugh. it is okay but not a good novel. translation was fluid and easy to understand. okay okay okay okay okay okay okay okay