Also a good catch, thank you
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Fantaisie · Ualer
queen good catch
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Fantaisie · Ualer
You know I've got you <3
Anxiously she glanced up to the ceiling, hundreds of ravens perched on the rafters of the throne room. Their feathers, pitch black. Each bird had sharp glowing purple eyes all staring down at what was happening.
Fantaisie · Ualer
Someone was angy
🧐
It seemed that at some point during the fight, the tall girl's makeshift seaweed top came apart, leaving her naked above the waist. She was covering her chest with one arm. Behind the arm, squished, the supple fullness of her…
Fantaisie · Guiltythree
I just wanted to say, thank you for catching my mistakes. Just when you think you've caught everything on a second read I miss an entire placeholder (name) xD I have acted on your comments, I hope you are enjoying the story.
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Thank you for catching that
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Fantaisie · Ualer
Hi there. I don't believe Rio has called Savina by her actual name, sorry if I made that error anywhere but I cannot see it.
"Neia?" Turning around Savina paused seeing Rio, men and women ran past him flooding the deck of the ship.
Fantaisie · Ualer
Thank you very much.
I'll allow it
Primordial Breaker
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