Author-nim here! Shameless review but I hope you find the story as grabbing as I wrote it. It was quite a challenge thinking of this story. I always thought of writing something simple and contemporary and this is what I came with. Anyway, enjoy reading Ria and Aleksei's love story. Until then! [img=recommend]
Honestly, me too. :')
*spoiler alert... she knew Lara was part witch. she was that one witch Lily was working with when she was looking a method to suppress her daughter's powers when Lara was still small... 😊😄
the writing in this story is...
Her bare feet squelched into the muddy earth; her hands spread out, feeling the long wiry grass. Her silky white nightgown clung to her body, drenched from the rain that washed away the blood flowing down her arms, dripping to the earth, and trailing behind her. The strong winds bellowed against her, a warning not to take another step as the storm above her raged on. She wanted to scream and curse at the sky with it, but something inside of her had snapped; her body was numb to feeling anything, including the small voice in her head urging her not to do it.
Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz
Of course! Youre welcome. Thank you so much for the comments. It inspires me very much. Looking forward to your thoughts in the coming chapters as well! :D
Your answers will be revealed in the coming chapters! hehe! Thank you so much for expressing your thoughts about the story through your comments. I always look forward into reading them everyday.
Lily looked down at her own hands and saw that it was stained with ink from doing her research. She's been spending time with a witch hoping to find the perfect binding spell that would suppress Lara's abilities until she's ready to control it.
Fantasy · AtlasWorld
Awww! This is why I write stories. To connect and make my readers feel. Immerse themselves in a world I made. I'm glad you like this chapter... I love it too. The efforts i poured into writing this was worth it. :D Looking forward to reading your comments in my next chapters :D
I'm glad you liked the chapter update! i hope there's no confusing parts in it. 😅💕
I'm glad you like it! 😊💕
The writing quality is good. Very easy too read and the emotions and world description is very easy to imagine. So far, the story progression has been great! Hoping for more updates in the future! ☺️*Friend Requested a Review
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Sci-fi · HeySteff