story just stared and it is allover the place. asking too much input from readers kinda kills the story. mc is too young for r18 content. overall everything feels forced. story concept has great pontetal tho.
have yelena mess with nat.
hello aurthor. enjoying ur story do u have a release schedual.
get john battleborn and the whitemane chick to join as pawns
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Harry Potter: Dragon Eyes
Book&Literature · FakeViolinist
really great story onlything holding you back is the gramer. some points of the story are just unreadable. please get some form of editing
"Well Minister," Harry said as he stood up and swung his foot as hard as possible in-between his victim's legs. "I would like you to meet Peter Pettigrew." Harry said as he hit Pettigrew with a body bind and stomped on his groin. "Now, remember when I said Sirius Black was innocent, remember that? I do. We should probably talk about that now." Harry said as he casually re-stomped the groin.
The Real Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Infinity_Weaver
+1
1) Let him have knowledge of the DxD verse
Reborn As Hades (DxD)
Anime & Comics · illyisabot
dont know what i expected. MC is bascaly all others. only thinking with his lower brain. like all other storys started really good but then it became wifu pokemon again. plot is a slow burn romance is forced and it is becoming very perdictable. so after 100 chaps im am gonna stop this as it is no longer fun to read.
its alive...
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The Crafter and The Slug
Anime & Comics · Yay_Pepto