yooo nice, a unique way to start the story frfr, the right amount of pace, so it doesn't drag too long either, shhhhh 👍👍
that last line frfr
pacing's too abrupt, he goes from point A to point B, and back to point A to go to point C with little to no transition. Ideally it's better to add something in between to make these chain of events flow more smoothly.
ty4chp 👍, idm any upload schedule, current one is fine as it is
Story is good, upload is frequent, but chapters are very short in return
Sách này đã bị xóa
not so sure abt this and the previous chapter, as it is essentially him waking up from getting passed out, receives an explanation, then pass out again, it gives of a out of place segment to the flow of the story. For this part, I'd say something like the first iteration of your previous work would be more appropriate, with a slight change, in which he has woken up after he got saved by the demon queen from being poisoned, then she can use that as a leverage or something to make Leon more complient of her request
I see, quite unfortunate that it happened 😞, considering the story was very nice, but welp, there is now this iteration, so I'm looking forward to see how this story goes 👍👍
iirc there was a novel I used to love reading here be4 it got removed entirely 😔, it's plot is roughly similar to this, are you the author of Dragon Empress won't let me go? (mightve botched the name a little, but it's roughly like that) also keep up the good work 👍👍
not bad, as far as info dumps go, this isn't too overwhelming
Anyway, that about sums up the summarized history and basic current structure of the island continent I'm on. I'll gradually get into the details later, this has become quite the info dump already, so I'll leave it at that for now.
The Reincarnated Mercenary's Only Skill is Item Box
Fantasy · Aimdaqs
ah darn 😔
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The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!
Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69